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Post by Luutiont on Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:23 pm

Name: Hidden Leaf Illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C(c rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then d rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~
Description: A genjutsu that places the opponents within a field Very dense and close together trees, as leaves continue to fall all around them. Making the opponent feel lost within the current area they are in. Providing a chance for an ambush attack . This genjutsu can be used on multiple targets at once. This is a rather simple genjutsu. to capture people in this genjutsu u generate of an aura of chakra and the aura acts as poison gas puting people into the gentusu.
weakness:this jutsu can be easly countred and noticed. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this

Name: Collapsing Lungs illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C(c rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then d rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~~``

Description: An illusion where a swirling whirlwind goes around the opponent, acting as it makes the opponent believe their is no air around them. Making them feel as if they cannot breathe, and if held long enough the opponent can become unconcious from not breathing. Do to the extent of this looking as a
ninjutsu, it is hard to tell this is a genjutsu.
weekness:this jutsu takes 3 posts of casting time. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this

Name: illusion of the ultimate wrath
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B-A(a rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then b rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~

Description: A psychological genjutsu. A quite simple genjutsu really though what it manages to accomplish is truly astounding. The opponent is overcome with a blinding rage towards a person only wanting to accomplish one thing in killing the user, but the benefit of this is that they slip into a mindless rage. Unable to think clearly, they can make mistakes or even focus . Due to being rather more then able to calmly control them selfs, D-C-rank users can avoide this
weekness:D-C rank users can easly avoid this jutsu.
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Name of Jutsu: Demon Claw
Rank: E - D(the higher rank you are the more chakra u can use to pump demon claw)
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Description:
Luutiont courses chakra around his hand, causing a thin membrane of chakra to cover his hand in what looks like an enlarged claw. He can then attack his opponent, causing more damage than normal due to the chakra enhancement. Also note that he can also deal slashing damage due to the chakra around his hands.
Weakness:
The technique can be easily countered, and as Luutiont himself is closer to his opponent, he is in greater risk of getting hit by potentially lethal close ranged techniques.


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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by The Science Freak on Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:58 pm

Declined until your original jutsu themselves are approved. Don't move ahead like that.
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:10 pm

well i whas hopeing to just forget about my previous jutsu and start new with these but i dont know how or if i can delete my post
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:23 pm

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Post by Luutiont on Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:40 pm

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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Kiyoshi on Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:40 am

Plz... dont bump your topic in 17 min.
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Post by The Science Freak on Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:46 am

My verdict stands.
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:49 am

is there a way i can or someone els can delete my old jutsus?
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Kiyoshi on Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:58 am

A mod.admin has to delete it.
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:46 am

couls your delete it for me?
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:20 pm

Luutiont wrote:couls your delete it for me?
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:51 pm

Luutiont wrote:
Luutiont wrote:couls your delete it for me?
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Kiyoshi on Sat Nov 28, 2009 7:07 pm

Yeah sure, but can you only bump your topics every 24 hours in the least because mods/admins don't like it too much when it's bumped in 3 hours.
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Post by Luutiont on Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:59 pm

ok sry i just thought u bumped when someone els posted in the same thing
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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by lifeanddeath on Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:24 am

Name: Hidden Leaf Illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~
Description: A genjutsu that places the opponents within a field Very dense and close together trees, as leaves continue to fall all around them. Making the opponent feel lost within the current area they are in. Providing a chance for an ambush attack . This genjutsu can be used on multiple targets at once. This is a rather simple genjutsu but still effects other sences]
weakness:this jutsu can be easly countred and noticed. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this

How does this vary from D-C rank. How does it effect each of the senses? How far of an area does this effect.

Name: Collapsing Lungs illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~~``

Description: An illusion where a swirling whirlwind goes around the opponent, acting as it makes the opponent believe their is no air around them. Making them feel as if they cannot breathe, and if held long enough the opponent can become unconcious from not breathing. Do to the extent of this looking as a
ninjutsu, it is hard to tell this is a genjutsu.
weekness:this jutsu takes 10 seconds of casting time. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this


How does this vary from D-C Rand? Please use a post count instead of actual time.

Name: illusion of the ultimate wrath
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~

Description: A psychological genjutsu. A quite simple genjutsu really though what it manages to accomplish is truly astounding. The opponent is overcome with a blinding rage towards a person only wanting to accomplish one thing in killing the user, but the benefit of this is that they slip into a mindless rage. Unable to think clearly, they can make mistakes or even focus . Due to being rather more then able to calmly control them selfs, D-C-rank users can avoide this
weekness:D-C rank users can easly avoid this jutsu.

You fail to explain how this varies from D-C Rank. The effects of this actually sound like a B or A rank Jutsu.

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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:39 pm

hows that?
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Post by lifeanddeath on Sun Nov 29, 2009 1:41 pm

Name: Hidden Leaf Illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C(c rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then d rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~
Description: A genjutsu that places the opponents within a field Very dense and close together trees, as leaves continue to fall all around them. Making the opponent feel lost within the current area they are in. Providing a chance for an ambush attack . This genjutsu can be used on multiple targets at once. This is a rather simple genjutsu but still effects other sences]
weakness:this jutsu can be easly countred and noticed. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this

How far of an area does this effect??


Name: illusion of the ultimate wrath
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-a(a rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then d rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~

Description: A psychological genjutsu. A quite simple genjutsu really though what it manages to accomplish is truly astounding. The opponent is overcome with a blinding rage towards a person only wanting to accomplish one thing in killing the user, but the benefit of this is that they slip into a mindless rage. Unable to think clearly, they can make mistakes or even focus . Due to being rather more then able to calmly control them selfs, D-C-rank users can avoide this
weekness:D-C rank users can easly avoid this jutsu.

This is an B or A rank genjutsu which means you will not be able to use it until a higher rank.

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Re: Luutionts genjutsu

Post by Luutiont on Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:23 pm

it dosent afect an area it affects someones state of mind makeing them think that there in a never ending forest

and im also puting demon claw on here even tho its not a genjutsu
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Post by lifeanddeath on Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:35 pm

This genjutsu can be used on multiple targets at once.

Therefore, it must have some sort of area that it can effect people in.

You need to remove illusion of the ultimate wrath , because you are not high enough rank to use it, therefore you will need to train it when you get a higher rank.


How does demon claw very from e-d rank.

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Post by Luutiont on Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:54 pm

ok hows that
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Post by lifeanddeath on Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:56 pm

[quote]ame: Hidden Leaf Illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D-C(c rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then d rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~~
Description: A genjutsu that places the opponents within a field Very dense and close together trees, as leaves continue to fall all around them. Making the opponent feel lost within the current area they are in. Providing a chance for an ambush attack . This genjutsu can be used on multiple targets at once. This is a rather simple genjutsu. to capture people in this genjutsu u generate of an aura of chakra and the aura acts as poison gas puting people into the gentusu.
weakness:this jutsu can be easly countred and noticed. and D-C rank users can easly avoid this[quote]

Okay, How far does the "aura reach"

Name: illusion of the ultimate wrath
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B-A(a rank users keep from hideing the fact that this jutsu is genjutsu more then b rank users)
Element Affinity:~~~~~~~~~~~

Description: A psychological genjutsu. A quite simple genjutsu really though what it manages to accomplish is truly astounding. The opponent is overcome with a blinding rage towards a person only wanting to accomplish one thing in killing the user, but the benefit of this is that they slip into a mindless rage. Unable to think clearly, they can make mistakes or even focus . Due to being rather more then able to calmly control them selfs, D-C-rank users can avoide this
weekness:D-C rank users can easly avoid this jutsu.


This needs to be removed as there is no way you could learn it yet.

And demon claw would be a D-C rank

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