Kanashii!

Name: Kanashii Metaru Bakugekiki
Nickname/Alias: Lavi

Age: 21

Age Appearance: 21
Appearance:

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He has white hair .He is very strong. 6'5 tall. His left eye is gray. He is very lean and skinny but very tall .
Although he has a glass eye that covers his right eye. It has the Clan symbol on it, his eye was taken from him at a young age. His eye was a drawing of his clan symbol on it. The eye is called Gigan and is a superficial eye that he contains. He has the clan symbol on the base of his neck was is clearly visible. Many people don't know it though. He has several piercings a bridge, his earings go from the lobe to the top. Leather tights and knee high boots. There is a black hood on his suit. It fits tight on his head.
He wears a very stealthy suit. It's gray and black with White gloves. He dresses different then most other Jonin. It is very strong and and withstand a kunai or shuriken and also a stab or slash with a sword. The shin and forearms guards are stronger than the rest of the armor but everywhere is still very strong. He has a scar that goes down his right eye and on top of his eye he has the clan symbol.

Gender:Male

Rank: A

Ninja Rank: Jonin

Village: Kumogakure,
Birthplace: Small village in Lighting country.
Previous Village: Ancestors came from the Metal village which was disbanded

Clan/Bloodline: Materu Bakugekiki!

Personality: He always jokes and is cocky. He always thinks he can do anything which somethings he can do. Even you fight him he is someone else. Like another soul eats up his nice one. . He is almost always in a good mood other them fighting.
Kanashii is a very laid back person. He's very funny and always makes jokes and remarks.
He's very active and outgoing. He is intelligent and very elite. He's very good at what he does. . He always looks at the positives if he gets in trouble. When he was in the academy he always was a 'smartass'. Even when he is in combat he makes smart remarks and comments. If someone makes fun of him he just goes and makes fun of them back. He may seem scary to his
He has a very loud mouth . When he was younger he all ways used to get in trouble for talking to much.
That is what made him so popular though. He was good to be around with.
Hes an Aries. He was born in March.He is almost never serious even when it comes to medical. he sometimes act immature. He always tries to think of the positives and helps out people when they need it.
He is usually the good of the good guys. If he was evil he would be the good of the bad guys.

Goals: Train!
Alignment: Good

Canon Personality: Deidara!

History: Young Arc.
Kanashii did live a very different life than many other shinobi. At the age five he was abandoned from his parents and entered in an ANBU school. The reason for the parents abandonment is unsure.
This is a school that kids go to at a young age and become stronger and is very intense training. Not many students do there but some are forced to like Kanashii. Most other students were maybe 6 or 7 so Kanashii was the youngest one there but still was expected to do the gruesome tasks to make him an elite shinobi.

This school was much worse than the Academy and some shinobi even died. First they would go through intensive training and having to past many test. They were considered C-B ranked by the age 10. They would do extensive internal and external tests to see your if you have any special requirements or any special abilities. Many students had a vase range of different powers which made sparing a difficult thing to do because their was a vase range of skill and power everyone had.

When Kanashii became 7 he became very skilled in Katon. That was the only thing he could do. They found out about his body and realized he was made of little small black particles, but they didn't know what it was. They went through a extent to figure it out but they couldn't. One spar Kanashii was cur on his right eye and he lost that eye. At that time the small metal particles became metal. Kanashii was going through agony. From the pain of his eye and how was body was changing at a rapid rate. His body was half metal, but he didn't even know it!

When he got the medical attention he needed they were not already to fix his eye. So they gave him an artificial eye which was even better. It allowed him to see charka, night vision, he could even see 2 miles away if focusing. It allowed him to see charka signatures and even let him deflect C ranked genjutsu! He had to go through surgery for hours for the doctors to connect his eye to his brain to send the right images working like an normal eye. After a couple months Kanshii had full control of it and had it upgraded to do different things.

A year later from getting his new eye he learned how to control his metal inside his body. After getting sliced by a sword he realized that instead of blood their was metal to protect it. The other shinobi tried to stab him and the sword bent from how strong his metal is. He didn't realize it until then that he was getting stronger and slower. He began to grow taller and weigh more. He started to be tested again by scientist about his powers and he soon could control metal perfectly. He started to make jutsu and weapons to help him.

By the time he was 12 he was the tallest, strongest ninja of his year. He fought against ninja that were 14 and 15 and he could still win. He learned that he could create bombs. He would take metal and heat it up and release it so it would explode where he wanted it too. He started to advance his metal skill and then realized that if the Katon nature would help with the metal, what could Raiton do? He started to look around to ask for training for Raiton control.

Their was this young star student named Lavi. They had alot in common although he was 19 Kanashii could compete with him. They would spar and teach each other jutsu. Lavi was one of the strongest shinobi there and they called Kanshii the next Lavi. Lavi taught Kanashii how to control the Raiton and insert it into his metal. After hours and months of training he figured out how to create metal to touch people to shock them or paralyze them. This would soon help him later.

One day Lavi and Kanashii were on a mission only the 2 of them. It was an A ranked mission.The law at the school was if you failed a mission they you are kicked out and exiled. Kanashii went with Lavi to invade a near by gang that was causing trouble. Their were many of them but the worst of all there was an S ranked shinobi. Kanashii and Lavi could take him on but not with his other gang members fighting. This battle took hours and everyone was exhausted or killed. Lavi knew they weren't going to be able to win and they had to retreat. Before they retreated they had to make sure this gang could be destroyed.

Kanashii made the biggest bomb he could. Lavi took hold off it and told Kanashii to detonate it in 30 seconds. Lavi then forced Kanashii out of the Gang head quarters.
Kanashii was crying and he was only 15 at the time, he was about to kill his best friend. During the countdown he cried in tears and didn't have the heart to do it. 3,2,1 BOOM!. Kanashii was forced to do it. He looked back at the huge bomb explode that caused a small fissure in the earth. The headquarters was smashed to the ground. At the time Kanashii was happy that his mission was complete but sad that his best friend was dead. They both killed the S ranked ninja named Yamaki

When Kanashii went back to the school headquarters with the bad news he had even worse. He was sent to the superintendent. It appeared that the mission was not complete and that Yamaki was still alive. His gang was dead but he wasn't. Kanashii burst in tears and anger. He slammed his hands on the desk with anger cracking the strong thick wooden desk. At that very moment Lavi walked through the doors with no bodily damage. This was Yamaki using Lavi's body but no one knew. Kanashii ran towards Yamaki/Levi and hugged him hoping he was alright.

Yamaki/Levi was in a dead stare and then that's when Kanashii was confused. He looked at him and then Lavi's body started to melt into the earth. Kanashii was shocked and let go and backed up a couple feet. Yamaki grow out of the ground where Lavi was and in his hand he had a bomb. He said "I'll give you 30 seconds"
The alert set off for everyone knowing we where being attacked. No one but Kanashii knew where the threat was he couldn't even stop it. He yelled at the top of his lungs to run and thats what he did.

He rank through the building telling people to run, 3,2,1. The bomb exploded while Kanashii was fleeing. Right at the front gate he flow and hit a tree. He got up grunting with pieces of skin torn off showing his bright metal. He went back into the building looking for survivors. No one survived. He was the only one left alive. All his childhood friends down in 30 seconds. A lifetime of memorizes knocked out in 30 seconds.

Kanashii fell to his knees in sorrow and cried. This day couldn't get any worse, he lost his life, his friends,even the girl he thought was cute. His best friend Lavi was dead, or was he? Lavi walked up Kanashii from infront and told him about his plan the whole time. He entered the clan being apart of the gang. Everything was already set up, except Kanashii was supposed to die already. Lavi never liked Kanashii and was sick of his glory which made him want to kill Kanashii even more.

They fought and in the end Kanashii was winning. Lavi thinking Kanashii didn't have the heart to kill him he posed him threatening and remained clam while in the grasp on Kanashii's metal strings. Knowing it was better to set Lavi free from his world, he was better off dead. Kanashii pulled his strings that he caught Lavi with so hard he turned away and crouched on one knee. The string pressed against his hips cutting himself to, the pressure was intense. Kanashii finally cut Lavi to pieces. Kanashii did not look back at Lavis body and walked away in search for Yamaki.

Search for Yamaki Arc.
He went and took and the remaining supplies left and a dorm still survived. That is where he lived from here. He was 18 at this time having plenty time to perfect his jutsus and his skill. This is when he could set off on his journey to find and kill this infamous gang leader named Yamaki. Word was he was in the Lighting country and he was trying to rebuild his gang. This time he would only accept A-S ranked shinobi.
Fortunately he only found one. The 2 of them could almost do whatever they wanted.
His partner named Jino was strong in his clan jutsu of protection,and medical.

That is what word on the street was. After a year long search finally being 19 he found the both of them. They found small counterfeits but either escaped. Now this was the time for them to fight to the death. 2 on 1 Kanashii was destined to win.
While giving blows Yamaki told Jino to hold back and have his back if he needed help, which he thought he didn't. After hours of another long battle, Jino's shields were getting weaker and weaker. Yamaki could keep going and so could Kanashi.
Kanashii created a claw connected to his hand. Yamaki ordered Jino to create a shield for him because he didn't have the speed to get away.

With all of Kanashii's strength he slammed right through Jino's shield and grabbed Yamaki. He lifted his up to the air started to squeeze breaking his bones. Jino was in shock and tried escaping. Kanashii threw Yamaki in order to kill Jino. Yamaki was just about dead. As Jino was about to escape Kanashii spawned a long spear from his chest he created 4 and they ran right through Jino's spine,kidney,back of neck and the direct center of his back. Kanashii sent Lighting nature to shock him to death aswell. When Kanashii killed Jino a small bird called Iroke called to him. He followed him everywhere he went. That is where He met Iroke.

Kanashii walked back to Yamaki who was lying on the floor dying. Yamaki was from the Cloud village and he told Kanashii to go there that they would take care of him.
For the last couple minutes of his life he had a sudden change of heart and was rather nice to Kanashii. Kanashii felt bad and wanted him to end the suffering and kill him right now. Kanashii spawned a huge hammer as big as Yamaki's body and slammed it right upon him. Blood splattered from under the blunt object and flew towards his mouth. He turned around without looking at the body and made his way to the Cloud village.

Cloud Village Arc.
In order to join the Cloud village Kanashii had to do community service and help in the Academy, He was 20 at this time. He and the Raikage made a deal since Kanashii was so helping that when he turned 21 4 mouths away, he was a legal member of the Cloud village and be promoted to Jonin. While working at the Academy he made strong bonds with his student who well soon be his own genin. Over the couple months he had become very close to the village and well do anything to protect it.
He puts his heart out for everything he does in this village.

When Kanashii turned 21 he had a ceremony of his promotion and was offered a team. Now what else lies ahead? Will he take the team? Will he betray Kumogakure?
Will he become promoted? Lets find out! On the next episode of Kanashii!





RP Sample:This is old.

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Seiji was running out of charka. He couldn't keep going this much. He has to hurry and end this fight. He know what to do. Apparently his enemy was thinking the same thing. Seiji was tried. His right ankle was hurting.
He had bruises. He was really taking quite a toll. He know would have to rely on his taijutsu. Something he relied on alot. He was very powerful and his style was intense.

He saw the chains coming right at him. Not having to much charka to waste he had to use a last resort. Oh man He didn't have a last resort! The only thing he could do,
very dangerous very deadly very risky. He needed to take that chance. He couldn't let himself die knowing he didn't try. His next jutsu might take enough charka, He would use Tenkuu Shotto but He couldn't charge enough charka to escape all those chains.

The only thing he could do was nothing. Seiji lifted his arms. They were showered in his own blood. By the time the chains came he would be dead. He couldn't do much.
He was about to get owned by this OP man. As if Seiji knew what to do. He couldn't simply dodge all of them. There were to many. So he took out a kunai with explosive tag on it. He threw it at the chains. It might have knocked some chains out but still, to many and too late. No jutsu he had could get him out of this. Not with the charka he has.
It would be too hard, then he will have to continue to fight and kill him with the pain he is already in. His hand, both of his hands, his ankle too. Nothing but a bunch of pain spoiled into one body.

Seiji was furious. It was check mate. Nothing to do but accept defeat. Just have to man up and take it. It won’t hurt. It will go on quick. He didn't want anyone to be mad at Seiji or that Iron man. He smirked about. Blood dripping from his nose forehead and mouth. He spit some blood out and raised his right hand up as high as he could. He raised his middle finger up and the other fingers down. He just flicked the man off. Hoping for at least a talk but no. He put his hands in his pockets and…

Slash! Several chains went right into Seiji. When he was hit by one he was knocked back, only moving on of his feet. As he got hit more he keep standing.
He was going to die. Seiji was in pain. I guess he was wrong. This will be painful.
A life that ever ninja lives through, in the end they all go through the same pain.
Blood started to drip all over his body. Blood sweat, no tears. Seiji wasn't mad at the man, only a little.

Seiji dropped to his knees, then fell on his side. He was dead. Blood coming out of his mouth, forehead, nose, arm, everywhere. Some pain for Seiji to go through.
Only wishing he could have done better for the Village.

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu,Elemental,Weaponry,
Dominant:Ninjutsu
Recessive:Weaponry,Elemental

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant:Fire and Earth = Metal (Bloodline)
Recessive:

Stat Points
Ninjutsu:5
Taijutsu:5
Genjutsu:3
Intelligence:3.5
Force:4
Speed:3.5
Stamina:4
Seal Knowledge:3

Du-be!
SUMMON

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Name: Du-be the Dune bear. Mister Bear. GoGo!
Rank: C-B
Appearance: except his fur is tan-ish
he weights 1,400 pounds and is 11 feet 7 inches tall

http://ultimateshinobi.forummotion.com/training-area-f136/meeting-du-be-again-p-t3630.htm#42231
Type of Summon: Blood Donation- has a tattoo of a square and an X in it which is located on his right wrist, when Roku's blood touches it, it links it to Du-be and summons him.
Species: Bear
Elemental Affinity: Earth
History:
While Roku was working at the hospital, he performed outstanding surgery by himself while everyone else was busy and he saved the man's life. The man was so greatful, he never wanted to battle again. Weeks later the man showed back up to Roku and give him he summon scroll. He wanted Roku to take care of Du-be.
Roku went to train with his man and once he masted the summon the man was never seen again. Roku calls this name Dube and thinks of him as a savior.
It is known that this man lived in the Bear country but nothing else is know about him. Roku sees him in his dreams and illusions.

Name: Earth Slam
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Earth
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be while slam his hands to the ground and well cause an earthquake. This earthquake will start 4 feet away from Du-be and it will cause a ring around it.
On a real life scale it would be a 1-2. Something more like a rumble and pot holes but can still cause damage.

Name: Bear Senbon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Earth
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be can make his fur straight like a senbon. The only person who can hold it is Du-Be Roku and Savior. For example if Du-be is on his back he can make all his fur stand up and spike people. Roku can remove these and throw them as senbons and it can stab people. Scary.

Name: Body Slam
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element:Earth
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be while slam his body towards the enemy. He will leap and try to land on the enemy, this is fairly fast and is very deadly. When it lands it makes a huge thud and shakes the ground.

Name: Du-Be Charge!
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be well start running and running. A gold glow well go around him which is Roku's lighting charka to make him go faster and untouchable. Du-be can make what he is running past fly away and the dead impact and kill or crash bones.

Name: Bear Claw
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element:Earth
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be well charge his claws with earth charka which well make them stronger and the cut can get infected faster. It is very strong and can break through boulders.

Name: Bear Roar
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: With Du-be's large physique almost anything is possible. Du-be well scream as loud as he can. It is strong and has the power to scare people. It is a small gust and it's really scary. It's really really really scary.
Mostly used to prevents fights. Can Knock over kids and genin.

Iroke!

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Name: Iroke Birdy

Nickname: Birdy Pal

Species: bird

Looks:
He is the Red bird. Also found in my siggy. He also sometimes has white armor around his whole body. really pretty and graceful. He has a horn on his head and bright blue eyes. His roots on his tail are red then turn blue. The Hair on his head is red then turns orange. He has sharp strong talons but they don't hurt Roku.
He can reach speeds up to 74 mph. Usually to send messages. On the back of his neck is a Kinko Symbol and on the front chest is a 6 and Love written.

Personality: Smart. He can talk to Roku and only Roku through telepathic ways. He usually leaves before battle or stays. He is in the moment type of bird. Loves eating. Does whatever he is told. He is fast agile strong. Sexy. Strong willpower and a little cocky.

Age: 2

History: This bird was sick and Roku took care of him. Drade never let his side ever since. Roku treated him when he was 11 and always looked after him since. They have a great relationship and love each other. Nothing can ever happen to him. These are very rare. Iroke won't even tell Roku where they are found. Fate found them because in the history books this was a very big symbol for the Kinko. Kinda like jaguars and Myans.

Jutsu's:None.

Gigan

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Name: Gigan

Appearance:
Rank: B

Special Abilities: It can let Kanashii look 2 miles out of he is focused and it can sense charka. Their are different lenses to see different things, Negative,black and white. It can be used to deflect C and under genjutsu.
It can be used to detect a lie.

Origin: My Character made it with his own hands. He was 11 and he needed something to use to be on look-out. It took him a couple years to perfect it.

Stop posting!

We're not done with the template yet.

AHA! MY GUY ALREADY LOOKS LIKE ALLEN WALKER I WIN.

Did you ask for permission to be jounin?

You're going to have to redo your template the right way with the bolds and the underlines.

You have enough history for a chuunin.

And you have the same Appearance as my character

Luu stop spamming the topic, pm him from now on.

Mikami, he asked and was granted jounin rank

Kanashii, please make sure that the appropriate places are bolded and underlined like Mikami asked. Won't take to much time.
Also, to receive jounin rank you will need 12 to 13 paragraphs.

I'll change it so the Kage has to put it in this thread.

Ok, no one told me anything, but that's fine.

Yes, he asked and has approval for Jounin.

Edited to fit concerns.
Thank you for approval to be a jonin.

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu,Tracking/Sensor,Weaponry,
Dominant:Ninjutsu
Recessive:Weaponry,Tracking/Sensor

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant:Metal
Recessive: Raiton,Katon

Stat Points
Ninjutsu:5
Taijutsu:5
Genjutsu:3.5
Intelligence:3.5
Force:4
Speed:3.5
Stamina:4

If you want Tracking/Senses you have to have chakra control and intelligence. You would also need to lower your chakra/stamina by .5 or 1 point.

Also your dominant element needs to be the elements that make up metal. You won't have a recessive element. Since you have a Kekkei Genkai, you get jutsu for Metal and jutsu for the elements that make up jutsu. So next to dominant you might put: Dominant: Fire and Earth = Metal (Bloodline)

Also your history doesn't seem to contain any taijutsu, so I would get rid of that 5 there. You seem to be more focused around ninjutsu, force, and stamina. I read your history and I don't remember reading much about taijutsu.

Ok.
I took off Tracking so what I did was I added Elemental. Which allows me to have different elements which I chose Raiton and Katon.

Then for the Stats. I used Taijutsu as a Weaponry topic.
So if weaponry doesn't fall under that,what does it fall under?

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant:Fire and Earth = Metal (Bloodline)
Recessive: Raiton,Katon

Only thing I have a problem with. This gives you three elements. If you have a kekkei genkai by that right, you could combine Fire and Earth, Fire and Lightning, and Earth and Lightning.

That's three elements, and three new KKG you get which is too much.

In Naruto, in the manga, people with bloodlines like yours only have two elements. They get the two base element and a "new element" when they combine them to gether. This is why will not have any recessive elements. So just leave recessive blank and have Katon and Doton like you have it now.

Can I have Katon and Raiton?=Metal?

Yeah. It seems like I'm trying to force you to get two elements, but you will still end up with three types of jutsu.

And if Katon and Raiton makes metal in your mind that's fine kinda with me. Really know one knows how elements work in Naruto. Some how water and lightning make light, even though he uses the kanji for storm.

Anyways, for metal, it's pretty obvious. I would at least say try to consider an earth element, since metal does come from the ground in a round about way. I know any two elements might make any new element, but it's somewhat obvious that metal should be associated with the ground.

But this is just a suggestion, even tough I would kind of like to see a Doton element in there.