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Post by Taizen Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:56 am

Name: Taizen Uchiha
Nickname/Alias: The Black Winged Uchiha

Age: 28
Age Appearance: 28

Appearance:

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Gender: Male

Rank: S
Ninja Rank: Jounin

Village: Kumo
Birthplace: Konoha
Previous Village: Konoha

Clan/Bloodline: Uchiha Sharingan

Personality: Taizen is the calm and collected type. He tries to refrain from talking but will go off on a tangent if the subject is something he truly believes in and needs to make a point. He is a good leader, capable of assessing any situation and coming up with the best soloution with the least amount of collateral damage. He is good at assessing people as well and determining much about them, personality, fighting style, etc, just by the way they act and examining the things they say. All in all he is very good at keeping to the shadows and is known by many as an expert assassin.

Goals: Currently - Achieve the Mangekyou Sharingan
Alignment: Chaotic Good - A Chaotic Good character favors change for a greater good, disdains bureaucratic organizations that get in the way of social improvement, and places a high value on personal freedom, not only for oneself, but for others as well. They always intend to do the right thing.

Canon Personality: Itatchi to some degree

History:

Pre-Shinobi Arc

Taizen was born in the Village of Konoha residing with the rest of his clan, the Uchiha, there home base of operations. He was born unto his father Kota and his mother Rengan, both of which well reknown in their family, the father in fact being in the running to become the next clan leader. At the time of the birth. He was a very grand ninja and a decorated Hero among them. He had served in countless battles and won a vast majority of them. He was known as the Uchihas Solar Flare for his speed and sheer power, being very adept with the fire element and using it to incinerate his opponents.

When his son was born, Kota began taking less and less jobs as the years drug on to take better care of his flesh and blood and begin his training as a private tutor. They trained constantly to prepare Taizen for the academy so he could continue on the family legacy in the shinobi world and make the clan proud to have him as their own. He entered the academy at only five years old, and was quick to grasp the basic concepts which has father had actually taught to him seperatly before hand, and so he had a vast head start in his ninja career. Many said if it wasnt for his father that he wouldnt have been half as talented, but truth was, Taizen was a pure natural, picking up any new concept with great ease, even though he hadnt even unlocked his sharingan yet.

It was no suprise when Taizen graduated the academy at the age of six, one of the youngest to have done so, but not a record by any means. Even still, it was considered a grand accomplishment and it was celebrated through out the clan, all of whom were very happy for him. Many gave him small gifts such as a handfull of Ryo, or equipment, or a random book or ninja scroll to congratulate him. It also just so happened that in the following week, the new clan leader would be decided, and Kota was still strong for the running, and it was not doubted by anyone that he would surely get the title.

First Tomoe Arc

As a reward, before he was assigned to a team, Kota decided to give his son yet another leg up in the shinobi world. Most fresh genin had never been on a mission before, but Kota was prepared to give his son the treat of a life time by taking him with him on a B ranked mission to the river country. It was his present to Taizen for doing so good thus far in his ninja career. The mission was to go and rescue a hostage, a regular citizen of Konoha who had been taken captive by a group of renegade ninja.

His father brought him along only to observe, and to see how a real ninja got the job done. They made their way quickly to the base of the renegade ninja, and the plan went mostly as expected. They managed to grab the young girl and set off back for Konoha. An unexpected occurrence passed as the renegades ambushed them just outside the borders of fire country. The battle went under way quickly, but there were a great deal many of them, and even Kota could not keep them all away from Taizen who was ill prepared for battle. Finally one of the rouges did get through and cornered Taizen. He came swiftly with a bladed dagger, aiming it straight for the jugular vein of the young Uchiha. The blade nearly found its mark, Taizen almost freezing up. He felt the pressure of the situation filling him, and in an instant, his sharingan awoke, revealing a single tomoe in one eye. His expression changed from scared to ready and confident and in a quick motion, the young boy dispatched the attacker, just as Kota finished off the last of the main group.

Kota was shocked when he turned around, but quickly turned to pride and gave his son a hug for the first time in the entire area of life which Taizen held memory of. The two continued onto Konoha, completing the mission and Taizen preparing himself further to become a genin. He was even more confident now then he had been before. He was assigned to a girl medical ninja and a ninja whos only capability was a profound use of the wind element the very next day. They got along great and were known as team 4. They were finally all official genin and shinobi, ready to receive their Jounin sensei and instruction on becoming better warriors for their home.

Genin Arc

The following week went by fast, the team being sent out on missions, typically centered in or near by Konoha and all of them on the low end of the spectrum of D and E ranked missions ranging from collecting trash off the streets to sweeping the Kage's mansion and other such tedious tasks. Taizen found the work rather boring and did not like it at all, but he knew it was necessary if he were to one day become the leader of his clan just like his father was going to that Friday night.

The ceremony was large and vast, with all the Uchiha clan members attending. The vote was taken that night in front of everyone, only the Uchiha who were Chunin or Jounin or ANBU or any equivalent rank were allowed to vote, so Taizen could not vote. Also any family member of a candidate could not vote, either way, Taizen had no say in the matter. It didnt matter though, for it was a landslide victory of 90% of the votes. The night was once again filled with celebration, and Kota's family basked in their glory, they were quickly becoming the most famous household in all of Konoha.

That night everyone went to sleep happy, all except one of the candidates, Yoshiro Uchiha, who had not recieved the clan leadership, losing to Kota. That night he snuck into the Kota estate, full to the brim of hatred, prepared to assassinate the new clan leader. However, making an amateur mistake, he entered through the wrong window, and found himself in Taizens room instead. Taizen woke with a start, and Yoshiro was upon him in an instant. Taizen gasped in fear as the man slid a well sharpened kunai between his ribs. Suddenly A burning light erupted around the man, and he was dragged away from the bleeding boy. Kota had felt the presence and come as soon as he had entered the house, triggering an alarm jutsu that alerted only Kota. He called for a squad to come detain Yoshiro and took it upon himself to take his son to the hospital where he stayed for only a day. When he awoke an hour after being laid to bed, his eyes slowly peering open, revealing the sharingan fully activated, and two tomoe swirling in their depths.

By the next day he was back with his team, still bandaged, but performing missions all the same, he had not missed a single day of action because of his ailment. The team showed concern for him, especially their Jounin leader, Sezbwa. He assured them all he was alright, and they found out they were going on thier first higher ranked mission, a C rank. They were to travel to kusagakure and gather intel through espionage and stealing documents for the village. This was the kicker to their active duty assignments as they did above superb on the mission, and many more of the same level soon followed.

This continued on for several months, even sending them on a few B ranked missions, some of the time only one of them going. They were the best team of their year, however, their jounin kept them training for 3 more years, getting them plenty of reputation before allowing them to try out for the chunin exams. Mostly the jounin was worried about Taizens Age, though she knew he could handle it. There was a mothering air about her, and she cared for all of her genin greatly.Swalloing her selfishness though, and compromising that he was now 9 years old, apporaching ten, and that he had been a shinobi for some time, he had well earned the right to try to become a chunin, as had the rest of the team.

Chunin Exam Arc

The chunin exams went fairly routine for the group known as Team 4. Nothing out of the ordinary happened, and all of them made it to a preliminary session to the final round. However, this was wear their unity ended, only Taizen making it past that point. A month was provided to all the finalists to train and get ever stronger, and it was through that time, that Sezbwa pushed him so hard, that he at last awoke his third tomoe at the age of ten, his birthday falling in the month long training period. They decided that this was his best secret weapon, having a more advanced sharingan then anyone expected. He also picked up a second elemental ability through this training, learning from Sezbwa the manipulation of earth. This would also assist him as everyone had only seen his display of the Fire element to that date.

The finals were a breeze for Taizen, each of his hidden secrets coming to aid him at a time of need and effectively getitng him to the winning spot as the tournament champion. However, that was not the intended purpose. Next was the irksome waiting to discover whether or not he had made it to chunin. He was brought to his Kage's chambers the following night. With a heavy heart he heard that he had not made the Chunin Rank, but his heart soared higher with the news following that message saying he had been selected to become an ANBU special ops shinobi. He accepted full heartedly. At only 10 years old, he had made it into the most respected division of all of Konoha.

ANBU Arc

Taizen had a very successful career in the ANBU forces, earning many respects as one of their most deadly warriors. About 2 years into being such, his commander fell in battle, and was brought back to Konoha, fatally wounded but still alive. There was no question that he was going to die, and a 12 year old Taizen was hand picked to be his successor as that squads capitan. He also handed him one of his trademarks, and went through the process of making a contract with the race of crows. This would also become further known as one of Taizen's signature techniques, and a focal point for a lot of jutsu he developed later down the road.

At only 12 years old, he was captain, and sevrved so for an astounding 8 years, untill he was 20 years old. The family was still the most respected in Konoha, his father still the clan leader and leading them all quite well. It began to be said that the man was losing his touch however, and whispers of Taizen succeeding him began to creep up. At this, Kota did finally begin to lose his touch, the preassure and rumors getting to his head, and his performances fell below the standard he had set for himself all those years. It was then that an old rival, Yoshiro, the man who had broken into Kotas house and almost murdered Taizen was released on good behavior.

Defection Arc

He quickly began to plot and develop methods which would grant him the title of clan leader and give him honor past that. In the end, he formed an elite task force of a few unhappy Uchiha and expertly managed to assassinate the Solar Flare as he had been called in a single night. Taizen was the last to be with his father before he died, and with his dying breath, he muttered, "Make sure justice finally meets Yoshiro," labeling his killer, but only Taizen had witnessed this phrase.

In the end nothing could be produced that would name Yoshiro as the killer, and he was let off, and in fact given the title as the new clan head. Taizens words had not been enough, but his fathers words were enough to make him do what he knew had to be done. Using a blade of his fathers own armory, he slew Yoshiro in the middle of the night. He was now a criminal. He knew the only fate that would await him should he stay would be exile or death, and so he chose a willing exile. He made a quick few rounds saying his good byes and exiting the town.

Kumo Arc

He traveled to the village of Kumo who took pitty on him and took him in, believing his story. They at first were apt to go hostile on Konoha, but he convinced them it was not worth it. The whole situation was by circumstance, and he held no ill will to his father land, in fact planing to return there some day. He resides in Kumo still, training and growing stronger with each passing day.

RP Sample:
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Skill Specialty:
Dominant: Ninjutsu, Intelligence
Recessive:Summoning, Fuuinjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant: Fire
Recessive: Earth

Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu:3
Genjutsu: 3.5
Intelligence: 5
Force:3
Speed:3.5
Stamina:5
Seal Knowledge:4


Last edited by Subeta on Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:31 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Post by Taizen Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:10 pm

Completion Bump,
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Post by The Science Freak Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:23 pm

Looks good by my standards. This will likely get accepted if someone who has the 'vicegrip' on the limitted Uchiha characters approves it.
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Post by Taizen Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:26 pm

If it would help i can remove dojutsu from specialty if that would hep so i would have sharingan but not be as skill full with it as Itachi or Sauske were
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Post by Marixia Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:37 pm

Cannot start out with three elements.

And well, all up to Kyouken's approval of Uchiha and Kiyoshi's approval as Kumo Jounin :/

EDIT: Gn approves you having an Uchiha
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Post by Taizen Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:40 pm

Well thats quite all right by me then ^^ edited out the wind element.
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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:29 pm

Genjutsu and speed need to be lowered by at least .5
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Post by Taizen Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:31 pm

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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:38 pm

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