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Chiyoko's Summoning: Yggdrasil

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Post by Chiyoko Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:33 pm

Summoned Creature or Item: Yggdrasil

Appearance: Chiyoko's summoning is simply a very, very large tree. The tree itself looks ancient and has a very expansive branch and root system that changes the landscape it is summoned in. The tree has a very pale green glow to it constantly.

Description: The tree's main ability is to possess energy/spirits/demons. When the tree is summoned, it connects itself with the user, allowing them access its power if needed (including those of what is stored). It also possesses a potent defensive technique in the form of a powerful barrier. The range of the barrier extends over the span of 2 minutes, allowing the summon to protect a large area if it is allowed to take root and expand far enough. Chiyoko controls admittance to the barrier. The barrier's maximum range is 100 yards and the fuel for the barrier comes from the sources within it (IE: Bijuu) along with its own natural chakra. Chiyoko controls admittance to the barrier via a special mark she is able to give to people. This is merely an expression of her will. Those with the mark are able to come and go within the barrier and use medical type techniques within it (they cannot be used to hurt someone). The barrier behaves similar to Shishi Enjin, however, it just creates a raw force, rather than a burning flame.

The tree, being a living entity and of fairly large size, is an appropriate storage vessel for entities such as Bijuu. It will grow to accommodate more entities within it, giving it potential to be one of the largest summons.

Aside from the barrier, the tree creates a very soothing field of healing (very slowly healing those within). Using the chakra from the tree, Chiyoko is able to manipulate it into her various healing jutsu. This is accomplished by placing her hands on the tree, allowing her to mold the chakra in the tree, creating the healing jutsu that she needs to restore her allies.

The tree seems to generally be able to communicate with Chiyoko, on some level. It seems to be more of a subconscious exchange, rather than any actual words.

Weakness: The tree cannot move and has no offensive abilities and no one within the barrier is capable of preforming any offensive techniques. The barrier's ability also prevents the summoner from attacking from the other side of the barrier. The barrier's power is also chained on the power the tree possesses and can be overpowered by incredibly powerful techniques (something like Kamui would work while Amaterasu would not). The tree cannot give more chakra than the summoner originally possessed (so essentially, at most, double chakra). Typically, this summon is not useful in combat and usually used to establish protected triage centers if needed.


Last edited by Chiyoko on Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:19 pm; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Edited for clarity)

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Post by Riku Shikyo Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:45 pm

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Post by Chiyoko Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:11 pm

Edited for clarity.

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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:28 pm

(I was told that I was supposed to review this application)

The range of the barrier extends each post, allowing the summon to protect a large area if it is allowed to take root and expand far enough.

Add in a maximum distance

The tree possesses the ability to store energy/spirits/demons

Add a bit on how it does that and what is can store.


The only people capable of using chakra while within the barrier are Chiyoko and those that she allows to use them.

Not really much of a weakness if you think about it.



Also, either place a time limit on how long it can be used for or put rank of chakra it takes.
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Post by Chiyoko Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:32 pm

Take note that the weakness states that you cannot use offensive jutsu while within the confines of the tree. Coupled with the fact that it has no offensive abilities of its own.....

The range is also dependent on the Bijuu that are within it, so I'll have to edit the range each time that I put a source of power within the tree.

The other points will be addressed.

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Post by lifeanddeath Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:13 pm

How do you manage to seal the most powerful Bijuu on the planet, not only that but as stated it has the power to contain all the bijuu when the 4th was only capable of doing it by sacrificing his life to use the 'God of Death' and even then, he only sealed the Yin away inside the Shinigami and sealed the Yang half inside Naruto
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Post by Chiyoko Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:17 pm

Considering the demon was sealed within something in Konoha to start with, all I did was transfer it.

Secondly, the tree works similarly to the summon Akatsuki uses to store demons. However, unlike being a statue, the summon is able to adapt to it and increase its storage capacity.

Given that the summon has absolutely no combat value in terms of actual power, although it can prevent/null a fight if absolutely needed, I don't quite get the huge issue with it since the tree is basically doing something that has been clearly shown as possible and doesn't really gain anything aside from some form of protection.

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