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Post by Revolution Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:27 pm

Name:
Kizu Manshin
Age:
22

Bloodline:
N/A

Rank:
N/A
Classification:
Jounin level Neo-Akatsuki member

Village:
Amegakure (Hidden rain village) He left the village after a failed rebelion.

Alignment:
Evil

Appearance:
Akatsuki cloak with a netted undershirt a brilliant white mohawk and standard shinobi pants. About 5'10 and weghing about 10 stone. Usualy seen with a cigarette. he wears his hidden rain head band on his arm typical of a missing nin there is a slash through the symbol.
Personality:
Calm and cool headed but completely insane. His world veiw was warped at an early age.

History:
Academy
During his time as a Hidden rain village academy Kizu was a avarage B student, but exeled at chakra focus witch meant he was brilliant at the clone jutsu and tree climbing etc. He was always surrounded by freinds and family and had a happy life. Always the optimist he constantly had a smile on his face, he loved to play in the streets of Amegakure with his freinds Hokuto and Sagi. They had known each other since they were younger and had always been freinds. Always getting up to no good as kids do, both Hokuto and Sagi were the same as Kizu in class avarage B students.

It was during his time in the academy Kizu's hair went prematurly white, due to this fact he was picked on and got into fights. His freinds were always there to defend him if he needed it, Kizu got tougher and tougher due to this and started to learn more Taijutsu. During this time his father who exeled at Taijutsu started to teach him drunken fist, Kizu was a natural and took to the training well. People started to notice his skills even his academy tutors started to notice the sudden jump in his abilities. They warned him not to train to hard because he was still young and his body coulden't take the same punishment as an adult.

During a training session with his freinds that he broke both his arms by taking a fall wrong and landing on them. He was laid up for weeks Kizu told his father he wished to learn medical ninjutsu to prevent such and incedent happening again, but his father knew no medical ninjutsu. So he went to the academy to ask his tutors if Kizu could have a crash course in medical ninjutsu, they denied his request due to the fact they didn't want to push Kizu to much. He had alredy started to exel at a complcated Taijutsu and to teach him anything else may push his young body over the limit. kizu's father disagreed with there choice but obey it none the less, After Kizu was fully recovered he took the Gennin exams and passed with flying colors.

Genin
After the Gennin exams Kizu was placed in a team with his freinds Houkuto and Sagi, they completed several D rank missions. Kizu was consatnly asking for a challange for his abilitys so the leader of Amegakure finaly relented and gave him a C rank mission. Kizu was overjoyed at the oppertunity, the mission was to gurd a caravan of trade goods to an outpost on the outskirts of the country. Within a day they set out with the trade caravan with was made up of several carts of trade goods such as preciuos metals and gems. The first day went without a hitch they set up camp for the night and set up a watch rota, during the night a small gruop of theives sneaked into the camp.

Kizu was on watch when one of the theives grabbed him round the neck from behind. The theif threated Kizu with a large knife at this point his teamates showed up, the thief shouted at them to back off without there sensei around they complied. Kizu seemed to be completely calm and cool witch realy unnerved the thief, the theif told Kizu to give him the combinations to the strong boxes on the caravans or he'd slit his throat. It was at the point Kizu started to laugh and told the theif to go to hell, the theif's face became angry then Kizu lifted his hand. In his palm was a paper bomb Kizu then calmly told the theif to back off or he would blow them both to bits.

The thief then moved the blade towards Kizu's neck, there was a brilliant falsh and a loud boom. when there eyesight returned Kizu and the theif were gone only bits and blood remained. At this point there sensei came darting over from the other side of the camp, both Hokuto and Sagi were in tears at the thought of loosing there freind. There sensei simply smiled when asked why he explained that after years of fighting he'd seen sights like this hundreds of times and there wasn't two bodies there. At that Kizu came out of the bushes his teammates thought they'd watched him die but what they haden't seen is Kizu use several clones to watch multiple directions at once at the start of his watch.

The team rounded up the rest of the theives without incedent, and took them with them for the rest of the journey so they could be imprisoned upon there return to the village. The rest of the mission went smoothly the carvan arrived untouched. And the squad returned to the village where the theives where imprisoned. Due to his actions Kizu and his squad where put forward for the upcoming chunin exams. The chunin exam's were a month away Kizu and his team were given that month to prepare. During this time Kizu was approached by one of the medical nin of Amegakure and offered to teach him medical ninjutsu. Kizu agreed and the medical nin took Kizu to the hospital and for the next month Kizu learned simple medical jutsu and techniques.

Chunin
During the chunin exams Kizu was pushed to his very limit's, every fight he won but he caught some serious blows in doing so. In one fight in particular after he was pronuced the winner but fell to the ground uncounious after the fight. After the Chunin exams Kizu was a changed man his mind had become twisted. His teamates became worried and asked him about it, he told them that it was the other shinobi's willingness to kill him that had shaken him and that it was nothing to worry about. In truth he had enjoy pushing himself to kill and wound his oppnents, a few monhs later and Kizu had moved out of his parents and got his own house with money he had saved from his missions.

To everyone else Kizu seemed to be back to his old self but that couldent be father from the truth. In his spare time Kizu buried himself in books learning every medical technique he could. One night whilst he was pouring over his books when he found a old report to the old leader of the village. It was about an attack on Konoha by the sand village and another village known as the sound village. Kizu had never heard of this village before but it wasn't that witch caught his intrest, it was the leader of the attack a man named Orochimaru the jutsu he used appealed to Kizu. He now spent all his time resaching everything he could about Orochimaru when the village leaders became suspicous he told them that it was to learn how to combat such techniques, of course that was a complete lie he was actuly learning the techniques.

Durimg a mission leading a Gennin team he was attacked by several unknown ninja. The technique's they used were reminisant of techniques used by sound ninja. Kizu killed them them without thinking twice he hid the bodies, claimng that if they left the bodies in the open more enemy shinobi could track them and attack them. Witch in itself was true enough but Kizu had a drarker purpose. After the mission was completed and the Gennin had left for home Kizu returned to the place where he had hid the bodies and took them back to his home under cover of darkness. Kizutook the bodies of the shinobi to the basement of his house and dissected them to learn the secrets of there jutsu.

After anther mission with Hokuto and Sagi he was put forward to become a Jounin. After a night of celebration with his team they all went back to Kizu's house and Kizu fell to sleep, Hokuto smelt a awful smell coming from his basement. He went to investagate and found the dimembered bodies of the shinobi Kizu had killed, Hokuto went to go and wake Sagi but found Kizu at the top of the stairs after a short and bloody fight Kizu killed Hokuto and Sagi who had been woken by the fight. The next day he went to the village leaders and claimed that his freinds had attacked him and left the village. For his bravery in the face of adverseity they promoted Kizu to Jounin.

Jounin and Rebelion
As a jounin Kizu was now privvy to information the lower ranking shinobi were not, such as the Akatsuki. Kizu now started to learn as mush as possible from the the information that his village had on the Akatsuki. Kizu was now commited to joining them, he just needed a way to prove that he was worthy of there attention. He poured over old reports looking for anything that would get there attention, finaly he came across one sinobi of legend that got the attention of all the major villages thereforth must have caught the attention of the Akatsuki his name was Zabuza Momochi.

For months he planned his rebelion and recruited others to his cause. Finaly he was prepared and so were his recriuts, the rebelion began. One night he and his recriuts broke into the village leaders masion and attempyed to killed him, but the village leader was two powerful and Kizu was forced to flee. During his retreat all of his recruits were killed, Kizu had been smart enough to make them think by giving there lives for him they were serving a greater purpose. But in the end the only served as decoy to aid his escape, Kizu fled deep into the wilderness surrounding Amegakure started his search for the Akatsuki.

Specialty:
Medical ninjutsu and Taijutsu

Learned Jutsus:
Basic academy jutsu
Name:
Chakra no Mesu - (Chakra Scalpel)
Rank:
C
Range:
Close
Type:
Medical ninjutsu
Users:
N/A
Elemental affinity:
N/A
Description:
Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
Weakness:
The attack can be blocked by most tpyes of Ninjutsu if preformed fast enough.
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Name:
Shikon no Jutsu - (Dead Soul Technique)
Rank:
B
Range:
Close, Mid

Type:
Medical ninjustsu
Users:
N/A
Elemaental affininty:
N/A
Description:
Shikon no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses a dead body to create the illusion of another living person. The ninja can either animate a normal dead person, or alter the appearance of the dead person to resemble another. To do the second version, the ninja first changes the appearance of the dead body to resemble the person to be portrayed. Then using this jutsu they make the heart beat again, allowing them to control the actions of the dead body.

Weakness:
Most eye techniques can see through this jutsu, and there is always the smell depending on how old the body is.
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Elements:
Katon/ Fire dominate, Doton/ Earth reccesive.

Weapons/items:
Medical kit (This includes all your standard medical stuff such as scapels, needle and thread, salves, ointments etc)

Goals:
To aquire as many medical techniques as possible. So he can become as powerful as the legandery Orochimaru and Tsunade.

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Post by Osamu_Rimaka Mon Aug 17, 2009 6:34 am

I like it. Ultimatly it's up to Kyouken and Kanji.
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Post by Riku Shikyo Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:26 am

Its Kaji, not Kanji

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Post by Kaji-Kanto Mon Aug 17, 2009 6:33 pm

*shrugs* approved
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Post by Revolution Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:12 pm

Thank you both.

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