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Post by Jsalos Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:30 pm

b]Name[/b]: Zhengyi Noromay
Nickname/Alias: Puppet lord, or Wind Scythe

Age: 27

Age Appearance: 29
Appearance: Zhengyi Noromay Sandaime_Kazekage_by_pokefreak

Gender: Male

Rank: S

Ninja Rank: S-rank Missing Nin

Village: Rogue
Birthplace: Sunagakure
Previous Village: Sunagakure

Clan/Bloodline: Sabure Bloodline, Ryota clan.

Personality: Zhengyi believes that society cannot exist without order, and that is why within akatsuki he tries to maintain the peace amonsty members, and is working towards what he beleives is to the greater benefit of the world. If it means that not everything he does seems just, or good, so be it. Zhengyi believes that the akatsuki is the best path to stability, as the villages have failed in his eyse to bring about stability. He thinks that He is an incredibely intelligent individual and has expert in combat deductive reasoning abilities, and is always able to keep a level head.


Goals: To end curroption, and obtain order and peace throughout the ninja world, by whatever means necessary.
Alignment: Lawful Evil

Canon Personality: Kind of like Danzo

History: Zhengyi was born in sunagakure, much as any other child. He was well loved by his family who tok care of him, and loved him dearly. Neither his father nor mother had ever served as shinobi, but both were master craftsmen of non combat puppets, and other woodworking trades. From a young Age, Zhengyi showed exceptional deductive reasoning abilties, and great athletic aptitude. He also was a natural leader among his peers, and seemed to have natural charisma for the majority of his young life. He always stood up for what was good, and protected those who needed it from a young age.

However, this all changed when he turned 7, and his mother was killed by a robber. His father sunk into a depression after this, and never was the same, though he tried to continue to help his son as much as possible. Zhengyi was in a state of shock, however. He didn't understand what was to be gained through such lawlessness. From that day forward, Zhengyi promised that he would do everything, no matter the cost, to uphold order, for without order, more deaths like his mothers would happen.

From this point forward, he began to notice the unruliness in the world around him, and finally at the age of 9 enrolled in the ninja academy, in hopes of bringing stability and peace to sunagakure. His father had begun to teach him the puppet making arts at this point, and Zhengyi caught on fast, indeed surpassing his father in only 2 years, at which point he graduated the academy.

When he entered his squad, the others looked up to him, as his natural intellect, and newly acquired talent with puppets made him quite the example. Indeed, in the first test that the squad leader put before him, Zhengyi stunned the jounin leader of his squad by catching him off guard, and very nearly killing the man. From this point, Zhengyi was treated with great respect, and his Jounin introduced him to sand style ninjutsu, a skill which Zhengyi also picked up fast. When he entered the chunin exams, he dominated, winning each round calculatingly, and dominatingly, but always making sure to inflict the minimum harm as necessary to force his opponent to surrender. He was made a chunin the first time around, at age 12.

As a chunin, he met his best friend, Garona. She and he were often paired on missions together, as her wind style jutsu complimented his sand techniques extremely well, and they worked well with one another. They worked together as a team for the better part of 4 years, over which time, Zhengyi gradually developed a romantic interest in her. He finally mustered up the courage to ask her out, and to his shock, and delight, she readily agreed.

Those years were the happiest of his life. He and Garona's personalities complimented one another perfectly. Never had he felt so whole and at peace with a person. He felt that he could tell Garona anything and she would listen. At the age of 22, He was preparing to propose, but before he could, they were assigned another mission. A mission that went horribly wrong. He and Garona, who were escorting a businessman, were ambushed by a hired gang of 12 B-rank missing nin, who killed the businessman, and slaughtered Garona without so much as a second thought.

Zhengyi had been out scouting when it occurred, and returned to find the woman he loved dead, as well as the subject of their mission. The proper thing to do would have been to return to sunagakure, however, He could not bring himself to do that. A cold fury hung in his heart, and, smearing two lines of Garona's blood on his face, he took her fan, and charged after the criminals. He ambushed them, and fought the most difficult battle of his entire life. But in the end, He stood triumphant, and somewhat hollow on the inside. He returned to the village with a cold hand over his heart, one that gave absolutely no forgiveness to those who lived outside the law.

Stunned by his exploits, the council of Sunagakure immeadiatley promoted him to Jounin. Zhengyi took the title without pause, and began furtherign his mastery of his three arts: sand jutsu, Puppet Mastery, and Wind Style, which he took up after Garona's death. He quickly became the most proficient jounin in the sand village. He used nearly 5 puppets at the same time, and began studying the dangerous art of flesh puppet making, experimenting on the corpses of missing-nin he was hired to assassinate.

He was quickly known in the bingo book as "puppet master zhengyi, wind scythe." And was one of the most feared jounin in the entire village. The missions he undertook would have made him a rich man, should he have so chosen to collect the wealth he earned, but Zhengyi took no more than necessary to survive. He stayed as a jounin until 24, when, as the 6th Kazekage stepped down, the council who, in zhenghyi's opinion should have nominated him to lead sunagakure, instead gave the position to a 19 year old kid.

Furious, Zhengyi stormed out of the village in a rage, taking all his puppets, parts, and designs with him. He then, In the cover of night, returned, at set light to the puppet core headquarters, as an act of revenge, before finally leaving the village for good. As he traveled, he decided first to go to the land of Kumogakure, and spend time in the mountains, perfecting his craft. He had mastered puppets to such a degree, that he was able to easily control large numbers of them at the same time, up to 10 total. He wandered the mountains for many years, occasionally hunting down and picking off missing-ninja and kumogakure shinobi, and turning their bodies to make newer, and more powerful puppets.

His collection began to grow, to the degree that he even decided to dispose of some of his lesser puppets. He also began experimenting with sealing chakra within them, so that they could perform their own jutsu. The results were quite extraordinary. His puppets powers vastly increased, to the degree that he was able to stand alone against multiple anbu at the same time. He also still created puppets out of nothing but the raw materials that he had taken with him on his journey.

However, despite his multiple creative masterpieces, he still felt there was curroption in the world, and that there was so little in his current state that he could do to change it. He felt that he was failing Garona, his lost love. His life was becoming hollow and empty. He wasn't able to make a difference to anyone anymore, and he couldn't accept that fact. For several monthes he pondered what he should do in order to find purpose.

He decided then, to visit the place where he had lost Garona. He hoped that this would give him inspiration as to what he should do. Kumogakure shinobi traveling the mountains had been warned to watch out for a 'mysterious puppet user garbed in a robe' but none of them got in Zhengyi's way. He traveled for many long days, rarely stopping to eat, drink or sleep. He traversed his way through the mountains, down into the bear country, where he and Garona had been on escort duty.

Finding the location, he found the Cairn which he had made for her. Kneeling at the sight, tears coming to his eyes, He asked the empty air "what should I do my love." A question that remained unawnsered. He sat in front of the grave for several days. Finally, on the fourth day, he found his resolve. He decided that in order to save this world from itself, he had to join one of its darkest organizations.

So, in search of a purpose, and a way to carry on being an Arbiter of justice, he decided to seek out the organization which these days was spoken of only in whispers, the Neo-Akatsuki. He left the mountains of sunagakure, glad in a simple robe and overcoat, his clothes of the shinobi long since discarded, due to the amount of trouble they had caused him with tracking squads. Life was far simpler with a less distinguished garb. He searched, looking for clues as to the akatsuki's location, discreetly asking people if they knew anything. Finally, he believe's he has a lead, and is currently attempting to follow it in hopes of joining the organization.


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Skill Specialty: [Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Fuuinjutsu/Seal Knowlege, Intelligence, Spiritually Attuned, Weaponry, Doujutsu, Chakra Control, Elemental, Puppetry, Summoning, Medical, Tracking/Senses]
Dominant: Puppetry, Ninjutsu
Recessive: Chakra Control, Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity: [What elements do you have? S through A Ranks can have three, B-C, can have two and D Ranks can have one]
Dominant:Sand= Earth+ Wind
Recessive: Fire

Stat Points [These are points in the manga that rate characters 1-5, 5 being the best, rank your character for each]
Ninjutsu: 5
Taijutsu:4
Genjutsu: 3
Intelligence: 3.5
Force: 4
Speed: 4
Stamina: 3.5
[u]Seal Knowledge 3


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Post by lifeanddeath Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:55 pm

You need 15 paragraph for S-rank(5 sentences with 5 with 5 words each min) for S rank.

You don't have Fuuinjutsu/Seal Knowlege listed as a specialty therefore you cannot have a 5 in it's stat.

Sand is a combination of wind and earth so in your dominant spot just put Earth+Wind=Sand
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Post by Jsalos Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:56 pm

erm is there any puppetry or chakra control stat or something that could be used as an identifier as my skill as a puppeteer? also, history has been lengthened.

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Post by Hatake Tane Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:17 pm

Chakra control... you'd have to change your stamina
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Post by lifeanddeath Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:21 pm


Ninjutsu: 5
Taijutsu:4.5
Genjutsu: 3
Intelligence: 3.5
Force: 4.5
Speed: 4.5
Stamina: 5
[u]Seal Knowledge 3

If your skill is recessive then it cannot go higher than four(taijutsu)
and if you have chakra control as a specialty then your stamina cannot go higher than 3.5

You still need two more paragraphs
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Post by Jsalos Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:00 am

edited.

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Post by lifeanddeath Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:05 am

You can remove earth and wind from your recessive as they are both dominant and used to make sand.

but otherwise,

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Post by Marixia Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:49 am

There is a bloodline to create sand, Sabure.
The clan is has revolved around, Ryota.


You may be in both if you wish.
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Post by Jsalos Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:33 pm

edited in clan/bloodline

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Post by lifeanddeath Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:40 pm

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