Dola the Flame

Name of Demon/Spirit:Dola the Flame

Gender of the Demon/Spirit: male

Age of the Demon Spirit: 1000 yrs

Appearance:
only Lukishiku Zutamomote has ever seen the full body of the demon. Anyone that looks into Lukishiku eyes would see the pure evilness of the demon. The demon has two horns like a ram that are as dark as a no moons night. He breathes fire through his nostrils and has teeth sharper then razors. This demon is what drives Lukishiku to be so completely evil. When somebody looks into his eyes at the demons power they lose all hope of life.

Personality: The demon wants nothing more but to kill everybody on the planet.

Skills/Abilities: The demon has the power of fire which gives Lukishiku his power. The demons fire is not from earth. This is a foreign fire from a far away planet where the demon is from. He was originally banned from there and forced to be live the rest of eternity in this rock. The fire is 10 times hotter than our fire. Being able to reach temperatures of 2000C easily.Its slightly darker in color than our fire and does not make smoke. This fire can not be put out by simple water or by cooling it. The only way to put the fire out on earth is to put a great amount of chakra over it. On earth even with its great power the fire is limited. Because our earth air is different than the foreign air the fire can only burn shortly (10 min/5 post) before going out on its own. Although if Lukishiku supplies constant chakra the fire can continue burning. Using the demon fire does not burn him (at least to an extent). The fire is so powerful that human bodies can not ever completely master it. This meaning that whenever Lukishiku uses it he is slightly burned on his chakra nodes inside of him. This really is his only limitation/restriction. The demon does not force Lukishiku to do anything he still has his free will but the demon destroyed his conscience. This is what makes Lukishiku so evil. Not to say that if the demon were ever extracted from him he would not be evil. When Dola possesses Lukishiku he loses his pupils and has an aura of fire that surrounds him. He can never be possessed for more than 10 min or the demons fire might completely destroy him. While being possessed Lukishiku becomes much stronger. The power is so great that he loses all conscience thought and destroys whatever is in the area. Once he gets out of that state he can not send chakra though his chakra nodes for several hrs (10 posts) because of how badly they were burned.

History: when he was very very young Lukishiku got lost at night. It was cold in the dense forest and Lukishiku thought he was going to freeze to death. Lukishiku was only 4 at the time and did not know how to start a fire or find his way back home. But while he was walking he noticed a fire. He walked over to the fire to try to get warm and noticed that that fire was burning on a rock. He was to young to understand that this was a odd occurrence so he just slept next to the rock.
The reason the rock was on fire was because of Dola. While the boy slept Dola transferred his soul into the boy. When Lukishiku woke up he felt hot so he took off his shirt. He felt stronger and faster more powerful than before. He suddenly was enlightened; he now knew what his goal was and why he had been brought to this rock (this eventually was the rock that he would use to make his flame sword). Dola showed him the way of the flame. Lukishiku (who was at the time being possessed by dola) did one motion and burned all the trees in between him and his home making a clear path to his house. He left burnt footprints ever since.

This fire does require chakra but just as naruto when Lukishiku is being possessed by the demon he can tap into the demons chakra.

Also the reason he was able to use such an advanced at such a young age and so quickly is because he was being possessed. Being so young it was easier for the demon to overpower his will.

The stronger uses of these powers require hand signs but the weaker skills don’t. Like a simple fire ball wouldn’t but a fire storm or such would.

The part about the eyes was just to describe how evil the demon inside of Lukishiku was. It really does not have any effect.

The fire is 10 times hotter than our fire. Its slightly darker in color than our fire and does not make smoke. This fire can not be put out by simple water or by cooling it. the only way to put the fire out on earth is to put a great amount of chakra over it.
The fire is so powerful that human bodies can not ever comepletly master it. This meaning that whenever Lukishiku uses it he is slightly burned on his chakra nodes inside of him. This really is his only limitation/restriction.

I added it to the description

This seems very powerful. In relation to a tailed beast, rank its power.

Could you tell me what the different rankings are please.

I mean like, is it as powerful as a one tail, or half as powerful as the one tail.
Or is it as powerful when Naruto gets the one tail cloak (like vs Sasuke)

Ok i would say that it makes Lukishiku as strong as naruto was when he had 2 tails. I dont remember if he actually went 2 tails i think he skipped to 3 but its not that powerful. Maybe when Lukishiku gets to a higher level he will be able to manipulate it better to make himself stronger but for now he only make Lukishiku as powerful as 2 tails.

Hmmm, this is going to be quite complicated. I'd have to discuss this with the administartors. Plus Aki already has a good knowledge on what she's going to do ( i think).

I know you were probably looking forward to RPing with everything approved, once again I'm sorry for your set back. I'll try to get some of the mods opinion on this.

You can continue RPing, just don't use for demon for now.

ok its cool thanks for all your help

What about S rank leveled water techniques? These techniques are normally considered immensely powerfully, some so powerful that it doesn't even seem like mere "water" anymore. And when you say a "great amount of charka" please be specific. It can easily be interpreted into many ways such as C rank being a great amount, or even D.

These S rank techniques would work if they were used on the fire. And also I added that the fire can only burn for 10 min to limit the power some.

Oh, and again, were you originally of the fire element, or do you only gain this through Dola? (Because this whole Dola thing interweaves itself with your abilities... cause if its not of your own element and only through Dola, that means all of your fire techs are incredibly powerful...)

Being born in the leaf village yes he is naturally attuned to fire.

Also, I have some questions. You've mentioned that Dola can possess you at times, how does that happen? And for how long can he control you? And what exactly happens to you when this happens? Do you become incredibly stronger? And what about the drawbacks when he possesses you?

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... Okay...... one thing with that is...... that it is EXTREMELY powerful, especially for a Genin, whether or not you can control it. And if he gets higher ranked/skilled this could easily change to something like four or six or more... so that itself makes you seem even more powerful than you should be.... And additionally if it is that powerful... there should be some more drawbacks, more major, serious ones, in my opinion anyway. (Also note that this conflicts with the whole thing that shinobi are not supposed to be as powerful as a Jinchurikki/Bijuu unless they have one sealed within themselves, at least before we learned about Kisame -_-'....)

i put in some more drawbacks and limited the power a little bit more.

Ok, first off, this isnt really too enforcing but you might wanna space out some of the paragreaphs to make it easier to read.

The fire is 10 times hotter than our fire. Being able to reach temperatures of 2000C easily.

Ok, 2000C is way too hot for anyone to withstand meaning that Lukishiku would be dead instantly

Although if Lukishiku supplies constant chakra the fire can continue burning.

You should at least put how much chakra it takes to keep it burning and for how long you can do it.

He can never be possessed for more than 10 min or the demons fire might completely destroy him.

How many posts would that be?

Ok, 2000C is way too hot for anyone to withstand meaning that Lukishiku would be dead instantly

The fire does not burn him only slightly but I will change it.

You should at least put how much chakra it takes to keep it burning and for how long you can do it.

he can do it as long as he can continue to supply chakra amount required is writtin in

How many posts would that be?

four

Ok, now all you have to do is follow aki's post and you're good.