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Post by Trafalgar Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:44 am

Name: Aurora Alura

Age: 22

Bloodline: Aurora

Rank: Jounin ( If allowed B-rank missing nin)
Classification:
Village: Hidden sound
Alignment:Hidden Sound, and The Hidden Mist

Appearance:Aurora Alura (Updated) Allenwalker

Personality: Alura is a very kind and sweet hearted person deep down, he is kind to those he likes and only to those he likes. If he find you just 1% untrustworthy he will make sure that he keeps an eye on you, he loves his family to the bitter end and works him self to the edge to support them. Alura is very vindictive to his enemies he puts on the persona of a demon in the eyes of others that do not like him. To the neutral population he is very persuasive and loves to get people on his side to help his family to any means.

History: Alura is the first son born of the great Marco and Gena Aurora, he is the coveted and most loved son by the clan thus far. Alura from birth was pampered and cared from by all the relatives and allied clans, he had it all because he was born when the clan was prospering. His father and mother were famous between the clan and allied clans and received much cash and support from many because of their fame.

Alura began learning very early by many others, he had famous ninja and jutsu specialist helping him out from the age of three. Because Alura was so gifted and famed he was gifted the Auroran Eyes at the age of three. Alura started learning how to target accurately vital organs and chakra points at the age of four. Alura progressed quickly and mastered the water clone jutsu, the hidden mist jutsu ,multiple targeting eye enhancement jutsu,and water waste land jutsu. Due to the difficulty of mastering the eye enhancement jutsu Alura received the young ninja award from the clan and over seers of the mist village.

Around the age of six while Alura's parent were not around he was staying with a temp family, the temp family had been boasting how they finally got the chance to let a prized child stay over. The other families were very happy for them at the time being until the family got attacked latter that week. The family had planned the attack because Alura was such a smart kid and knew plenty of good jutsu. They family allowed the hired ninja to enter the home and attempt at the boys life, they did it so that they could video tape it all and boast some more.

Alura was still sleeping at the time of the break in, when the family had left to hide. Alura was awoke by a young genin from the hidden rain village. The genin successfully surprised Alura and took his left eye, Alura being so old responded how any normal kid would. He began fleeing the large mansion to face more and more ninja around each corner. As much as he screamed the family did not answer. They figured he could handle himself, they were busy filming the whole thing and thought that he had caught on. It was surprisingly a joke to them that he was putting on a show, but they were wrong.

Alura managed to get out of the mansion into their large back yard, the rain shinobi surrounded the seven year kid and began pushing him back and forth each time he tried to run. Alura after a while began to grasp the situation that the family had been killed, Alura thought of everything his family taught him. He began using his knowledge and limited jutsu to fight them, he found that the shinobi were bullies and had no real talent. Easily fending them off Alura let out a scream in victory that he had won, the family came from there hidden locations to congratulate the boy.

Alura welcomed them with open arms and a friendly smile, his eye was in critical condition. The family saw to it that he got the best transplant available. Alura was implanted into his left eye the psionic kekkei genkai, it allowed him to materialize a black glove on to his arm when the dojutsu was started. The glove spread out to create some metallic claws, the claws can withstand even the hardest force and tear through the hardest substances with ease. Its super speed vibration allows it to shatter elemental jutsu. Alura can create a pulse from the glove that will reveal chakra to the eye, when he releases the pulse a glass type of monocle appears over the left eye so that he can see chakra in front of him.

Alura made usage of both his dojutsu, the Aurora right eye and the Psionic left eye. In efforts to hide that the young kid had been injured the family instilled a jutsu onto Alura to ensure that a mask appears over his face when his left eye was started. This was done because his scar appears, the eye has red rings inside it, and the floating monocle. The mask acts as the monocle and covers the scar. The shading makes it so that both of his eyes look red like a monster, Alura was too young to recognize it so went on in life.

Alura entered the Academy at the young age of seven since he had been trained and conditioned enough for it. During that same year his little brother Honse was born. Alura was to see that he finally had a sibling, but this was the bad time for him to be born. Alura was starting to figure out some of the cruel things that were actually going on in the world, it was easy for him to see that the family had set him up back then. He forgave them since he was able to obtain a few unique weapons and another dojutsu in place of the suffering.

The family began teaching Alura some of the clan techniques so that he could mature and become a better ninja than his class mates. Alura took the knowledge gracefully and continued to learn, around the time he was eight he had notice that his brother was not being treated with the same tender love and care as him. Alura would question them about but constantly they said that it was not his time. Alura being young ignored it and continued the village suffered a few attacks and some mysterious plots were developing.

As Alura grew he noticed that his parents mission count was beginning to decrease, he thought that maybe the end of shinobi was near. Alura questioned his abilities and time for years, he thought that he would never have the chance to make because work was disappearing. With time Alura graduated the academy at 11 years old, he continued to notice that his brother received little praise and very little attention.

Alura was put into a squad with mostly girls, he liked the squad since others were jealous of him. His sensei was a very beautiful women known amongst the entire village. His two team mates were women that were much weaker than he, Alura spent weeks watching them training on things he had long since learned. The team went on very few missions and made little to no progress at all. The other teams with majorily boys and male sensei's advanced and left his grew behind within a years time they were all chuunin and a select few jounin.

Alura was eventually left alone as the women in his squad eventually quit due to their lack of talent. This time Alura was placed in a much higher chuunin team with strong peers. They were around the same level as him, he enjoyed this team and grew with them quickly. The team waited for him since he was only a genin, they helped but could not believe he was a genin. Alura told them how he was stuck in such a horrible team before and the team matured.

Then that happened, Alura was placed in the Chuunin exams with a temp team that was missing a team member because of a tragic accident. Alura was overly qualified to take the written portion, he passed it with flying colors, the next part of the exams the forest of death. The two he was with were ordinary genin and had a few rare skills that you would not see typically. They enetered the forest and they were attacked by a high level group of jounin collector ninja.

The jounin group killed off the other two easily since they were weak, Alura was left alone with the heaven scroll to fend for himself. Alura fought them and defeated them, but he used his left eye in the process. A higher ranked ninja that was not supposed to be there noticed this. He had figured the clan was dead, he was researching the clan for some time now but did not know they were still around. In the books it is writing that the psionic clan is no longer in existence, the ninja attacked Alura trying to take his eye.

Alura and the ninja went at it for a while causing a large commotion in the forest, Alura used some pretty flashy jutsu that should not be used by a genin. As well did the higher ranked ninja, before long the officials noticed it and began to get worried that some of the students were too strong. Alura suffered a large wound across the back from shoulder to shoulder, the man lost an arm but that was about it. He was intrigued that Alura could manage to last this long with only a scar across the back and he lost an arm.

The man an Alura eventually settled down and had a nice little chat, Alura explained how he got all his rare items and this no longer existing dojutsu. The man believed every word of it with a smile, he gave Alura his famous white coat. The coat is a memento from the psionic clan, as the man is the last surviving member. The coat can only be gained if you have both eyes, but one eye was sufficient enough to keep the coat since the man was no longer there. The man and Alura made a bet that Alura would die before he could give the coat back to the man.

Alura took the scroll and passed the second part of the exam easily, some how he was still the very first to finish. They officials noticed how he came out with something more than he originally had. In the third round Alura faced off against a kid from the hidden leaf village. The kid used fire style jutsu, but instead he used it to affect the environment. It seems that the kid trains in rigorous conditions such as very high heat, and intense humidity. With Alura's water jutsu and the kids fire it created that intense humidity.

Alura was losing for most of the battle until he got the upper hand by using the jackets ability. It re hydrated him enough so that he could fight the battle as if it was normal, it seems that Alura had much more to learn about the jacket. The humidity fight drained most of the people in there and it was the worst exam recorded in history. After the long break Alura had mastered the jacket and he was ready for the finals.

In the finals Alura faced an acid user that outmatched him in water based techniques, the acid countered most of his water techniques. And some of the Aurora techniques, in that battle Alura created a dual technique using both Aurora and psionic pulse. It allowed him to change the properties of the acid into a different acid and create a bubble. The bubble surrounded the acid user it did not allow for his acid to disperse the bubble. The acid user continued to struggle, eventually he filled the bubble with acid and drowned off the acid.

Alura swept the competition with an overwhelming victory, he saw more and more of that praise from when he was young. His mom and dad did not come but his brother was there with his temp family. Alura was happy to see that his brother could make it but his mom and dad not making it saddened him the most. He could not believe that his parents did not make after all they did for him and taught him. Alura figured that it was ok since they probably got a mission after a long awaited time, he was happier of that thought than his own becoming a chuunin.

Alura returned to the mist and joined his original time with smile, he graduated from the academy at the age of 11. Within just four years Alura matured and grew quickly. After a few higher ranked mission Alura returned home for a short break to notice that his mom had picked up a drinking debt as well his father had a gambling debt. Alura was making some pretty nice cash but this was way too much for a chuunin. Alura wanted to grow faster, so he began to study the advanced clan techniques and prepared for the jounin examination. He knew that this one would be toughest he had to face yet, he would be ready though.

As time passed Alura grew and his support dimmed, he thought that he was letting the family down way too much. Alura left with his team to take the Jounin exams. Others had began to recognize his name and fear him, they liked his determination but some thought that he just did not have enough. A few criminals began wanting his attention, they felt that they could control his emotions and maybe gain a powerful ally. Alura was more concerned with his family though such trivial matters came second.

Alura was tossed around and spun, his world was thrown into chaos just before the jounin exams. Too much was going on he was being consumed by the madness of gaining power. He did not like it just wanted to get money to support his family, his team was urging him to do many things they did not help much but only make things worse. Alura rushed forward directly at the jounin exams with his eyes closed he shut everyone else off.

Entering the exams at 15 Alura had figured out the masks ability, he used the mask for the duration of the exams. Others saw a person that they did not want to talk to or get next to. His eyes were glowing red, a dark sinister chakra seemed like it was enveloping him. Alura was the least person on everyone's mind, he did not even look like himself but more a clown. He had long clowns, a mask and a long coat with a fuzzy coat.

Alura passed the test portion of the exams easily so long as no one talked to him, he made no friends. Alura was consumed by the darkness his goal was right in front of him but others would not let him get to it they were simply getting his way. When it came time to meet back up with his team he did with tears in his eyes. He could only think how he would fail if they got in his way, due to his previous experience he knew that he could go on without them.

Alura and his team entered the week long second part of the exam, they faced a few trials together before Alura began to let them handle all the work. He was going to let them die, he wanted no dead weight so this was the only way to go. His team mates got weaker and weaker until they had to rely on Alura. Alura smiled in confidence that he would face their next enemy, instead he went the other direction and allowed his teammates to die. Alura moved forward without the team on his shoulders and aced the second.

Alura went head first into the next part of the exam, he casted a genjutsu on the entire exams third part. They went on as planned but were being controlled easily, when it came time to his fight the opponent never came near Alura. Alura played with him since most of them were good at detecting genjutsu they would never have guessed he had not done one yet. Alura picked with his foe and played around until the guy was out of chakra. He was screaming that this was all set up,that there was no chance in hell Alura used a genjutsu that he had not noticed.

Alura was going to go in for the kill but the battle was stopped and Alura won because the guy had lost his sanity, Alura with a blood curdling smile laughed. He walked away knowing that he had a long break until the final examination, Alura had not cared for the lives of others but only for his family now. When it came time for the finals Alura found that it could not stop the fun that he could not be freed form his hatred of others now. He was far to deep in the darkness to return to the light, he wanted to though. Something deep down made him feel sick but he did not know what.

Alura found himself facing a family member of the previous person he faced in the chuunin exams, Aluras hatred grew deeper and deeper. He knew how he hated the length of that battle, for the first time Alura went full force on someone. Alura found himself tearing at the kids veins allowing the blood to cover him. Alura killed the person in the most brutal of ways, the Kages that were judging named him the bloody clown. It was then Alura was placed in a bingo book with his own bounty on his head, Alura did not know nor did he care.

Alura became Jounin easily and returned home, the darkness was gone. He was coming back for him family, that exam had brought the worst out of him. Alura was happy when he finally returned home, he came bearing cash and smiles. He threw a celebration with his brother. Alura began urging his brother to start training and get ready but the things they had faced traumatized the brother he just did not want to become a ninja.

Alura was sad for his brother but he could not mourn his decision forever. Alura began to think of the man and their promise from when he was younger. That thought of losing riddled his mind, the thought of getting more cash riddled his mind. Alura left to find, that man and maybe find the key to more cash. Alura searched for a few years until he was 20, he heard how things were going at home and was very satisfied.

But what Alura would find that year he would not be able to bear it, the man was the leader of a mysterious clinic. Alura joined and began doing various jobs. Soon he was filed as a missing ninja since he had not been on a mission within a year, he did not know but he found out he was in a bingo book. The multiple assassination attempts drove him back into his corner of darkness. Alura could no longer return home since he was now a missing ninja.

Alura began creating new jutsu but time was enough, Alura wanted to start chasing the big cash. He told the man that he would fail the bet since he was never going to return the jacket. Alura left so that he could join an organization and maybe turn them all in one by one by allowing them to die or killing them.

Specialty: Alura specializes in the use of the Aurora clan eye/S and the psinoc eye. He is gifted in the use of dual elements along with torture.
Learned Justus: Alura has learned the water clone jutsu,the hidden mist jutsu,multiple targeting eye enhancement jutsu,water waste land, zero visibility accuracy, aurora spike, aurora disk, psionic disturbance, psionic onset, *acid rain*, rain, water claw, steam clone, exploding steam clone, hidden steam, silent mist assassination, silent steam assassination, and silent rain assassination.
Elements: water
Recessive elements: fire, *Acid* (water, aurora, fire)
Weapons/items:Sword kunai, exploding kunai, shuriken, water whistle, vibrating logs,and makabishi spikes.
Goals:

*if allowed if not allowed ignore the things wrapped in asterisk *


Last edited by Trafalgar on Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:28 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : suggestions made by another member.)
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Oct 02, 2009 4:56 am

Just a note.
The Elements consist of the Big 5, so Aurora wouldn't be one just because you created it. (Water, Earth, Lightning, Wind, Fire)

They are also not going to allow acid or anything from the new manga until it is explained in depth, limited and such. Plus, you can't have a kekkei genkai as a recessive element, and having more that two elements and a bloodline will probably be considered as OP. I don't agree with Kishimoto doing that with the Mizukage...and the admins probably won't either.

So that's just a heads up. If you edit that today, someone should get to it today, or late tonight.
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Post by Trafalgar Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:13 pm

Thanks for the heads up I edited the things you suggested upon. I just felt it somewhat necessary to be a more powerful water based user. But I can fully understand why it would not be accepted. I also need to get his jutsu into the jutsu section.
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Post by Guest Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:18 pm

Yea, That bloodline is off limits.

And another thing. The hidden sound isn't opened. So you are gonna need to change your village.

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Post by Shini Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:47 am

Ooh! He looks like, Seth, back in the day ^_^
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Post by Hatake Tane Mon Oct 19, 2009 9:44 am

Please edit your recessive elements, we're currently not allowing Acid until we get more information on it's limits and abilities from the manga.
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