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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:37 pm

Name: Yoshidoku Kangai
Nickname/Alias: Yoshido, Yoshi Jr
Age: 6
Age Appearance: 8

Appearance:
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Gender: Male

Rank: C/D
Ninja Rank: Genin

Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konoha
Previous Village: -

Clan/Bloodline: Kangai / Koudogan

Personality: Yoshidoku is a very curious boy. He can sometimes be shy around different people, while being hyper and kiddish around his friends. He spends most of his time outside, and wandering around the village, but staying close to village Jounin and especially his father, Yoshimaru. He enjoys playing on his wooden ocarina, sleeping in tree's, making plants grow, and studying plants and poisons. He is very intelligent for his age.

Goals: Create many different poisons as possible, learn many different jutsu using poison, become like his father Yoshimaru.
Alignment: Good

Canon Personality: Shikamaru

History: Yoshidoku is the son of Yoshimaru[Wife soon to be revealed]. He was born over one year before the 5 year time skip. He was named Yoshidoku because Doku was part of the word 'Poison' in Japanese. He was also one of the special type of Kangai to have been born with the Regrowth Earth Seal, like his father. Speaking of his father, he had inheirited the normal Kangai brown hair, and his ocean blue eyes. Yoshido grew up a pretty normal life with his mom and dad.

Whilst he was growing up, Yoshimaru had been helping him communicate with the nature around him. Yoshido was also very interested in learning how to mix potions and making different poisons. His father took him on adventurious missions with him, as a result, having Yoshido knowing what its like to be apart of a real Jonin mission, as well as gathering different plants and keeping them in the little messenger bag his mother bought him. The bag contained veils, and many other equiptment to gather, harvest, grind, and mix different recources together.

Now that he's 6 years old, and in the present day, he had completed the Academy and is now a genin. His sensei is his father until he gets assigned one perminantly. Yoshimaru helps Yoshido learn ninjutsu and making different plants grow for Yoshido's poison. He also tought him how to mix the poison with his plant jutsu, making the jutsu powerfuller and more effective. Yoshidoku is on the path to becoming like his father, and to make more friends.

RP Sample:


Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Intelligence
Dominant: Ninjutsu
Recessive: Intelligence [Used for rich poison crafting/making]

Elemental Affinity: Wood
Dominant: Water + Earth = Wood
Recessive:

Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 3
Taijutsu:2
Genjutsu:1
Intelligence:3
Force:2
Speed:2
Stamina:2
Seal Knowledge3


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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:42 am

Im done but im not sure if I should give a RP sample lol.
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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:20 pm

Like I've said before, don't really understand the stat system, but I Gennin can't have a can't have a level 4 in anything.
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:03 pm

Elemental Affinity: Wood/Plantlife, Poison
Dominant: Wood/Plantlife [Bloodline, no water fusion needed]
Recessive: Poison [Handcrafted/made poison fused with plant jutsu]

How does your bloodline work? I would like to see it.

Poison is not a recessive element. If you make it with your hands it should go in item creation. Then once you create it there, you need to say that you manipulate this created poison with some other element to make poisonous plants.

Your dominant elements need to be

Wood+Earth = Plant life. You should have nothing under recessive. (Whatever makes your elemental bloodline)
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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:55 pm

Okay i'll change that
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:08 pm

What do you mean by no water fusion?
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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:19 pm

I think she means how wood is normally Water/Earth
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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:29 pm

The Kangai clan never used water to fuse it with Earth to make plantlife/wood/mokuton... its been that way forever.
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:00 pm

Mokuton is made with water and earth.

How is it an elemental KKG if you don't have two elements to add to it?
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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:32 pm

Kangai naturally have mokuton chakra....
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:49 pm

That means they have a KKG. So that means your only elements are water and earth.

No no one can come equipped with chakra as you are trying to explain it.
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:09 pm

We changed things in skill specialty, the underlined note. Please check if yours need to be changed.
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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:03 pm

I changed it so water is recessive, then. When you approve this, can you delete the spam?
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:05 pm

Elemental Affinity: Wood
Dominant: Wood/Earth
Recessive: Water

That needs to be

Elemental Affinity: Wood
Dominant: Earth + Water = Wood
Recessive: Leave blank

And I wont delete this, its good info just in-case something happens to your character. Don't worry though it doesn't affect your app.
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Post by Yoshimaru Kangai Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:08 pm

Alright fixed lol.
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:09 pm

Kiyoshi wrote:Like I've said before, don't really understand the stat system, but I Gennin can't have a can't have a level 4 in anything.
Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu:2
Genjutsu:1
Intelligence:3
Force:2
Speed:2.5
Stamina:2.5
Seal Knowledge3

Fix this
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Post by Hatake Tane Fri Jan 01, 2010 10:23 pm

Approve
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