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Post by Keiteki Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:24 pm

Name: Uchiha Kumori
Nickname/Alias: Kumori

Age: 23

Age Appearance: 23
Appearance:

Kumori only stands at an average height for a man, standing at six feet and one inch tall. He weighs about one-hundred and seventy nine pounds. Kumori's skin is tanned, and it appears as if it is in a shadow. Kumori has a muscular structure, powerful biceps, and tough abs. He also has strong leg muscles. He has dark brown, greasy hair, which is straight, and points down, forming 2-dimensional spikes pointing down, made out of hair. He also has a pony tail, which hangs behind him, and is like Itachi Uchiha's. In addition, he wears a necklace, which is covered in the hooked teeth of a carnivorous animal, all of them pointing counter-clockwise around him. Lastly, wherever he goes, he always has two ninja packs on him, both on his sides, to hold his supplies, such as weapons, scrolls, and other items.

Kumori has different outfits that he wears. He has an outfit that he wears when he is doing Special Operations work, which he wears the most, and is characterized by the high quality, perfect vision goggles that he wears. Another part of the uniform is brown to tan colored shirt, wrapped in material of the same color, to improve camouflage in the craggy, harsh rock mountains. He has pants of the same color as well, and working shoes. He is completely covered from head to toe during a Special ops mission. Brown bandage-like material covers his head, only allowing some of his hair to stick out.

Other times, he can be seen wearing his own Cloud Shinobi uniform, which is a little different from the standard. He wears a black, thermal undershirt. In addition, he wears a pair of light brown pants. He wears sandals as well in this setup. On his body, he wears a white Flak Jacket, which is covers his whole torso. It has triangular guards extending over the shoulder. It also has a pocket for scrolls to the bottom right of the jacket, and a pocket to keep other things on the bottom left side. He wears his ninja packs on his sides

Gender:Male

Rank: A or S
Ninja Rank: Jounin

Village: Kumogakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Previous Village: Konohagakure

Clan/Bloodline: Sharingan

Personality:

Kumori is a good leader, despite his personality. One of his biggest fears is betrayal by his comrades or his village, so he promises disloyalty with dismemberment, and he promises to snuff any rebellion. He is a serious person, and rarely jokes around. He talks with an almost monotone voice, and emotion only shows in his voice when he is angry. He gets angry often, when things do not go his way, though he tries not to let it get in the way of his decisions. Kumori has a belief that Ninja are not meant to have honor or respect. They were made to do the dirty work that needed to be done. He has no personal honor, and no problem with doing whatever it takes to complete a mission.

Kumori is a very smart and intelligent person. He plays out scenarios in his head when making a tough decision, and he again applies good logic. He is loyal to the Raikage, because he is one of the few people who are above him, but his allegiance is not to the current Raikage, and Kumori is not truly loyal to anybody except for himself. When he is not doing an assignment, he spends most of his time alone, training or sleeping, eating just enough so that he is healthy. He is merciless to his foes. All enemies are the same in his eyes, that they need to be defeated or destroyed. He is selfish, and only cares about himself. He does not respect most people, and only pretends to respect people that he wants or needs to them to respect or look up to him.


Goals: To become the Raikage, and turn the Village Hidden in the Clouds into a militaristic state.
Alignment: Evil

Canon Personality: Danzo

History: MANGA SPOILERS

Before we begin with the life history of this man, let us first look at the end that became the new beginning that is Kumori Uchiha. The powerful Uchiha Clan of the Village Hidden in the Leaves was envied and famed for their powerful Kekkei Genkai, the Sharingan Doujutsu, which did a number of things that gave the user of the Sharingan a great advantage over an enemy so great, that during a great ninja war between Konoha and Suna, Sand Shinobi who encountered an Uchiha alone were taught to flee from them, because victory was considered all but impossible.

The Uchiha Clan was planning to revolt against the rest of the Hidden Leaf Village. The clan was very powerful, and although the revolt would likely end in failure, many ninja and people would die during it. Luckily for the Leaf Village, there was a double agent in the Uchiha Clan, Itachi. He allowed Konoha to know about the uprising, and before it could be started, Itachi was instructed to wipe out the entire clan. He did so, sparing only one Uchiha. After this massacre, only three Uchiha remained in the world. However, more than three people possessed the Sharingan.

Danzo was the first, and only man to try and keep the Uchiha Clan from going extinct. The only known piece of isolated DNA of the Sharingan to ever exist was hidden deep below Konoha, with Root ANBU. However, it was a long time before any attempt was made to use this DNA. It remained with the Root ANBU for years, until it came out of cold storage for usage. Times have been changing, and technology has reached its peak. An embryo child, grown deep underground, was injected with DNA from the Sharingan. Once incubation had finished, tests had confirmed that he was indeed Uchiha. He had the potential to awaken his Sharingan. Unlike other Root ANBU, he had no real name, so his code name became his real name. He was Kumori. Kumori Uchiha.

The light was minuscule in the laboratory room. The only light came from the light blue monitors, and the glowing, large tube in the middle of the room. The liquid inside was blurry, but the faint shape of a young human was inside of the tube. There were many cords and wires inside, all of them connecting the nine month old embryo to life support devices, to support a healthy development. Back from the grave, the Uchiha are reborn in a single child. He has Uchiha Fugaku's DNA inside of him, and therefore, the ability to awaken the Sharingan. Half of his DNA, half of another woman's. He was developed almost identically to a normal baby.

His incubation period has came to an end. A few people stood in the room, all of them in black coats, and hats on. It was hard to decipher who they were. The machine that kept the baby healthy began to change. The liquid inside drained through the tube, going elsewhere in this complex. The baby was put through a tube by the electronic arms inside of the tube. It was squeezed out, and into the arms of one of the cloaked figures. The baby was crying, and it was wrapped inside of a blanket. The dim lights in the room barely illuminated the child's face. The men looked at the baby in awe.

“This baby is one of the last of the famed Uchiha clan. The only pure blooded Uchiha left. It has the potential to awaken the Sharingan, and therefore, the potential of a powerful weapon for Root. He will be cared for, and trained as early as possible in the Shinobi arts.” One of the men instructed...”


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Post by Keiteki Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:25 pm

Created by years of genetic experimentation and testing, finally, the fruit of their efforts. He was named Kumori. Because he had no original name, his code name became his real name. His full name was Kumori Uchiha, but he was only referred to as Kumori. Immediately, he was placed into some kind of daycare, with one other baby. The baby belonged to Root ANBU. Kumori never found out how the baby was obtained. He could have been abducted by Root ANBU, or he could be the child of somebody in Root ANBU, or even a test tube baby like Kumori.

The baby's name was Atreyu. He was a member of the powerful Hyuuga Clan, who possessed the Byakugan Kekkei Genkai. Later on, he would become a part of Kumori's background. However, right now in Kumori's life, he was simply another face. They were not treated like babies. They were not given many toys, and hugged. They were simply left in their cribs to sleep, and taken out to get changed or to eat. It was a very uneventful life. Both babies would learn to walk early in their life, and were vigorously trained to do it, even as toddlers. The two were competing, and were somewhat rivals.

It wasn't long before Root ANBU tried to teach them to speak. Kumori had a little difficulty learning how to communicate through words in the english language, but he was able to learn basic words after Atreyu. With words, Kumori's personality began to develop, and reveal itself. Atreyu, too, was going under personal development. Atreyu was a little more selfless than Kumori was, and a little more active than he was. Atreyu annoyed Kumori often. The two were almost like siblings, and their rivalry began to develop. Who could become the strongest Ninja first?

A year later, both of them were placed into Root ANBU training. They worked with other, senior members of the Root ANBU organization. Their curriculum was much more strict than the one above ground. As a result, they would advance ranks much quicker than a Konoha ninja above the surface. The existence of an Uchiha underground was a secret. Not even the Hokage knew about him. There were only records of this boy's existence in Root ANBU. He did very well under his training, and was appointed to Genin rank at the age of six, a month before his seventh birthday.

The two of them were trained together, and made to do training exercises together, and were encouraged to help each other grow and get stronger. And they did. They both became powerful, and they helped one another to become better, growing a brotherly bond in the process. It was only a few years after the two graduated to Genin Rank that the next challenge ahead of them would come. This time, they were put to the test to become Chuunin. Root ANBU filled out many papers to have this doen when Kumori was eleven years old, and Atreyu was eleven too. They were sent into the Konoha Chuunin Exams, and successfully completed the first exam. They were the first to finish, and cheat off of the other Shinobi, and make it to the second exam.

Kumori watched as the gates of the Forest of Death opened, beckoning those brave enough to enter its depths. Besides the presence of Ninja who wanted to kill you for a Heaven or Earth scroll, There were poisonous fungi and plants, and carnivorous animals who would hunt for you in your sleep. The Forest of Death was only another stepping stone for the two prospects. Kumori was wearing a black hoodie shirt, and light brown pants, with sandals, a ninja pack, and a sword hung over his shoulder. His hair was different, much shorter than before. His eyes were filled with determination, and all he wanted to do was get past this exam. Unlike the ninja of Konoha, Kumori's team was trained much more intensively as Konoha ninja. They were well prepared for this portion of the exam.

Atreyu stood beside him, with his silver, spiky hair held up by a Leaf headband. He wore a light blue, short sleeved shirt, with black shorts, bandaged legs, a ninja pack, and sandals. Kumori did not pay much attention to the other ninja in their group, as he was instructed to not even help the two in combat, unless they were about to be killed, at which point he could kill the enemy ninja, and recover the Uchiha's DNA. However, the two ninja he would be supervising would not be saved. Only the Sharingan was important to Root ANBU, and using it as a weapon.

The three of them watched as many other Shinobi around them began to walk inside of the gates to hell, watching as they entered the dense, humid forest. The calls of many different animals filled the air around the forest, yet the calls of the larger animals that lived deeper in the forest were muffled by the trees and leaves. Kumori and his team entered the forest last, letting the others get ahead, so that Kumori and his team could chase them down quickly. The light quickly faded as the team walked into the forest, leaving behind the village Jounin. It was quiet. The ninja took to the trees, and left the area.

Later, they took rest under the roots of a tree, with the ANBU Root member leaving the boys, to go and get something to eat, or maybe take a leak. They knew full well that the two of them were on their own in this exam. Even if they were slightly ahead of the other Genin hear, they were still outnumbered. This could be harder than they thought. They sat under the tree, deciding on how to get the Heaven scroll.

They sat under the roots like it was a fort, with green all over the inside of the trunk. There was moss, and slime against part of the wall. Both of the ninjas sat with their backs against the tree, partly looking at each other, and also watching the outside of their hideaway. There was a small amount of open space in front of the tree, surrounded by bushes and other undergrowth, with giant, twisted trees enclosed around this one tree. Little did they know, this was one of the worst places to be in the Forest of Death.

A minute ago, there was a loose symphony of various tweets, snarls, calls, and croaks in the air. However, suddenly, it was much quieter. The voices of the animals had ceased. Kumori was the first to notice, and looked at Atreyu.

“Something is coming. If all of the animals have stopped making noise, then that means that they don't want something finding them.” Kumori told him quietly.

“Where's Zoyochi?” Atreyu asked Kumori.

Kumori and Atreyu left the safety of the crawl space in the tree's roots, heading into the dark, silent woods. There was nothing they could hear except their own footsteps through the underbrush. They looked at each other, and wandered into the middle of the circle of the clearing. Kumori's heart suddenly stopped, as he felt some kind of brush against his head. He looked back, but saw nothing, until he thought of looking above him. He looked up, and to his horror, he saw a beast above him, like a demon. It was a monster found inside of the Forest of Death.

He was a long, snake like creature, probably more than fifty feet long in length. He had a bony, dragon like head, with big, yellow and black eyes. They made the creature look manic. It had large fins around the back of its head. It was scaly, and had long, skinny arms around its thorax area. Its tail was long and skinny. The monster was wrapped around a branch, curled around it, its head pointing straight at Kumori. To his surprise, there was a human leg sticking out of his leg, about the size of an adult males. Kumori suddenly realized that their overseer had been eaten by this giant Basilisk-like creature.

“Atreyu, get the hell out of here!” Kumori screamed, as he immediately ran, and hurried Atreyu along with him, the beast quickly uncurled from its perch, and fell from its vantage point in the trees, falling in the light undergrowth, rolling around a little, before snarling loudly, and using its arms to pull itself in the direction of Kumori and Atreyu, going at a surprisingly fast speed for a beast his size. He ran just as fast as Kumori and Atreyu could run. It moved like a snake, but used its four arms to pull itself, swishing its tail back and forth like a crocodile. It remained in hot pursuit of the two ninja.

Kumori was truly scared. The Jounin Ninja who was supposed to be overseeing their progress was killed by that monster. The two of them wondered what kind of chance they stood against a monster like that, if even a Jounin could not survive an attack from it. Kumori just kept on running, trying to think of a plan to survive. Both of them knew damn well that running from this thing would only make them both tired, and when they were too tired to run anymore, they would just be easy pickings for that beast. Slimes hung down from the tree branches as the two ninja rushed through the floor of the forest, with the beast pursuing them not far behind.

Kumori did not know how to fight this monster, and neither did Atreyu. They had to fight, however. So, it was time to stop running away from this. Either they fought, and stand a chance of surviving, or they doom themselves trying to flee. They flew right past the trees, and into a clearing, running up a tree at the other edge of the clearing, and standing on a branch overhead from the clearing. The Basilisk flew past the trees. Kumori could only took a split second to look at the beast, and he really had no idea just how big this monster was. It was humongous. Defeating this thing seemed impossible. As it rampaged into the clearing, it slowed down, and reared its ugly head before bellowing.

After letting out a battle cry, Kumori could feel the air get a tiny bit warmer, and so did Atreyu, and they both jumped out of the tree, avoiding the beast's stream of burning hot flames jump out of its jaws. The flamethrower cut right through the tree, and ignited the whole thing is seconds. As soon as he realized that he did not fry the two of them as he had intended, he pushed himself into the middle of the clearing, and stood on his body, all four of his arms in the body, turning to look at both of them, and screeching to try and intimidate both of them. Kumori was wet with some of the creature's saliva. He could see the countless rows of razor sharp teeth lined in its jaws. It had huge front teeth to grip food, and the back teeth were for chewing. Its tongue was long and black. Its eyes stared into Kumori's. The beast was the personification of terror.

Kumori jumped away from the creature, and attempted to throw kunai out the beast's head. It ducked, and most of the kunai missed. However, one managed to hit his body. However, it was simply bounced off, barely leaving a scratch in the scaly body of the beast. Kumori thought this thing must've been invincible. One of the beast's hands lunged forward, grabbing Kumori in the middle of his jump, and squeezing him so hard, it was like two trucks running into each other. He could feel himself beind crushed by the giant demonic thing. Its jaws were wide open, ready to swallow Kumori whole. Suddenly, the beast's eyes widened, and it let out the largest scream Kumori had ever heard. It's eyes shook, and its tongue spasmed, and its grip immediately died, and he dropped Kumori.

Atreyu had jumped behind the monster, and stuck a sword through the beast's back, drawing blood from it, its hand reached behind it like lightning, desperate to get the sword out of his back, he took Atreyu by his legs, and tossed him like an object, spinning through the air, his back hit a tree out of the clearing, and he fell off the tree, drowning in the undergrowth. Kumori watched as his friend was tossed away, meant to die. Kumori could only think about one thing, and that was killing the beast who dared to do that to his friend. He took the broadsword out of its containment, and held it in both hands. Kumori grinded his teeth as he stared death in the face. But, if he died here, he would die fighting.

The beast moved first, one of its left hands coming down quickly, and like a bombshell, it slammed into the brush, dirt and dust exploding from under and around his hand. Kumori spun out of the way, swinging his sword, trying to cut through the beast's hand, he only managed to scratch the tough, scaly armor that protected it from something as strong as a stainless steel sword. Another arm came from the beast's right side, trying to grab Kumori. He jumped out of the way, and slashed at the creature, but yet again only managing to scratch the tough scaly skin of the creature. Kumori jumped back, his teeth pushing against each other in frustration. How would he kill this thing is its armored skin made so many of his cuts and slices useless? He would need to use a different method of fighting this thing.

He put the sword in it's sheath, and jumped, reaching into his ninja pack, he picked a Shuriken out of the tools inside, jumping to the left of the best, throwing it at the beast's left eye. He simply used the elbow of his other left arm to block the Shuriken, with the weapon simply bouncing off. The Basilisk turned its whole body around, and reared back, its tail folding behind it against trees, its arms moving behind its lowered head, its jaws opened wide, and a river of fire flooded out, and it was coming straight for Kumori. Kumori rolled to the side, but the flame was coming for him, and he had to run behind a tree to avoid being fried alive. The situation was bad. Kumori had intelligence over the beast, but the monster had agility, strength, and speed all on its edge. Kumori decided to use a simple Ninjutsu to try and get a surprise attack on the thing.

Kumori made a normal Bunshin of himself, and the clone went up the tree, and jumped down into the clearing, before running around, trying to draw the fire of the Basilisk. The creature saw Kumori's clone, run, and aimed so that it would burn the clone, but even an empty distraction was agile like Kumori. Kumori tried to sneak around the trees and undergrowth to stab this creature in the head, but amazingly, its telescopic, and chameleon eyes found Keiteki trying to sneak around him, and the fire quickly came back to Kumori. He ended up hiding behind another tree. The clone was already gone anyway.

The creature began moving towards the tree, its footsteps shaking the ground around Kumori, the heat against the tree becoming more intense, until Kumori knew it was time to go, and the fire actually punctured the tree, and the monster stopped blowing the flame to push the tree aside, pushing the stem of them great tree into the rest of them, revealing a little bit of sunlight. He blew more flame out of his mouth, only in a burst, rather than sustained beam of flames. He tried to swipe with his hand to hit Kumori, but he managed to avoid being hit by the monster, and also avoid the bursting flames from its mouth. Kumori stood against the monster, jumping onto a rock, and jumping off to avoid an arm swipe, rolling to avoid more fire.

Kumoti found himself rolling across the clearing. The battle was so intense, he barely noticed getting hit by the monster in the side. A rib was cracked by the thing's knuckle. It's bony knuckle was monstrously strong. He found himself on his side, looking at the beast in the trees, before it began crawling out of the trees, towards Kumori. Kumori would not give up, and let himself die here. He needed to at least save Atreyu, if he couldn't save the both of them. He refused to leave Atreyu here. Before he knew it, the beast was right over Kumori, and he tried to roll away as the jaws of the creature opened, and its head lunged down, only managing to grab the hood of his shirt. It pulled him up, and started shaking him vigorously like a Lion shakes a Zebra after it has taken it down, to dislodge the neck.

The monster threw Kumori across the ground, hurting him even further. He could not take much more punishment. He unsheathed his sword with his right hand, and made stood in a stance to defend himself, but he was beginning to break down from fear. One arm came forward, and one of his hands tried to grab him, but he used his sword to block the force of his hand, but another arm snagged Kumori by his legs, and picked Kumori up, still holding on to his sword, and windmilled with his hand once before slamming Kumori on to the ground by his back. He was in immense pain, and now he was in the grip of the beast. All of it's immense pressure was now on Kumori. There was no escape anymore. He could have taken the opportunity to escape, leaving Atreyu as bait to allow him to get away, but he did not desert his comrade.

The beast's head got close to Kumori, and stared him in the eyes. Maybe it was trying to tell him “good game”, but there was nothing he could do now. The beast snorted, inhaling. Kumori felt like all hope was lost, and before he knew it, he already felt dead, and he wasn't even gone yet. His eyes closed, just waiting for everything to be over. He didn't think there was anything more he could. He released the grip on his sword. Then, suddenly, something happened. A sudden change. He felt a strange thing going on his head, and in his eyes. He opened his eyes, and looked to see something had happened. The beast in front of him had glowing blue all around. Kumori could see the chakra emanating from the beast.

Away from the action, Kumori looked, and saw a faint, but sure blue glow far away. He knew what it was. Atreyu was still alive. Unconscious, but alive. Kumori's Sharingan had appeared in his eyes, and now he realized he could not give up. Maybe this was a message, maybe not, but maybe seeing Atreyu still alive gave him the inspiration to keep on fighting. As the beasts jaws widened, and came down to bit Kumori's head off, he took his sword, and jammed it between the beast's jaws. The creature, unable to close his jaws, came into a predicament. Trying to close and snap the sword made it stab into the monster. Of course, due to a lack of intelligence, it could not figure out to open its jaws to release it. Kumori then took a kunai out of his ninja pack, and immediately plunged it into the hand of the monster. It screamed in pain, and released its grip.

Kumori was free of the monster's hand, but now he did not have a sword. Finally, the monster managed to open its jaws wide enough to release the sword, and it fell out of the creature's mouth point first, and it fell to the ground. Blood was dripping from the roof of the creature's mouth, and from the monster's hand. It was furious, and Kumori could see with his newly awakened Sharingan eye that chakra was building up near the monster's mouth. Taking cover quickly, the burst of fire was so strong, it blew right through the tree, knocking it down and setting it to flames. Fire was all around Kumori, and this whole part of the forest is at risk of burning down. He jumped behind another tree before the fire could hit him, and destroy him. This time, he was going to pull the clone trick again.

The flaw with of this hunter animal is intelligence. The inability to practice trial and error. It would easily fall for the same clone trick, and he used it again. Something appearing to be Kumori jumped out from behind the tree. It ran around, and moved the fire away from Kumori, giving him a good shot at hitting the only vulnerable part of this beast: its eye. Kumori jumped out from around the corner of the tree, throwing a Kunai heading straight for the creature's eye. The fire began to change direction, trying to hit Kumori, but it suddenly stopped. Blood splattered from the Basilisk's head, as the kunai hit the bottom of the creature's eye, the monster wailing in pain. It was now blind in an eye. Blood began to tear down from its eye, with the kunai still in the monster's eyes. It was getting worn down from blood loss and pain.

The monster was getting sick of fighting with his prey. It was time to end this ordeal. The monster rushed for Kumori, one of its hands reaching for him as quickly as it could, gripping him with all of his strength. It held Kumori up. Kumori could see chakra starting to build up in its mouth. It was going to fry his head. It would be unimaginably painful, and the chance of survival would be near zero. However, Kumori had an ace in the hole: an explosive tag attached to the kunai. With one free hand, he made a hand sign, and the tag began crackling.

Kumori looked at the creature with contempt as it looked around, trying to find the source of the buzzing, until the tag exploded in both of their faces. The hand holding Kumori loosened, and Kumori fell out of the monster's grip, on to the ground. He was very bruised from this ordeal, but the giant dragon lizard was not going to walk away at all. The explosion had torn right through the creature's head, the explosion blowing up all of the creature's eye, and also sending the kunai right through the monster's head entirely. Blood was pouring out of the messy, disgusting, half empty eye socket of the once terrifying beast. Once a terror of the Forest of Death, the Basilisk was no more. Kumori did not do it now, but later on, Kumori would return to the site of this battle, and pluck teeth from this monster's mouth, and make it his prize...


Kumori took Atreyu back to camp, and together, using Kumori's special Genjutsu barrier Jutsu, they killed an enemy team, and got their scroll from them. Now in possession of a Heaven and Earth, The two made their way to the center tower. Kumori was no longer using his Sharingan, but when he got their, there was no other teams inside of the waiting room. When the second exam was over, the amount of people who made it to the Tower was less than a fourth of all of the people who made it to the second exam. Kumori began to wonder if the Jounin who was with them was the only meal for that monster. This is because there was another team who came in with only two people. There was one, traumatized person who came without a team altogether. He described the attack is grisly and tearful. His comrades were torn apart alive by the beast.

He did not pass the second test, but the other team who had reportedly lost a member in the exams was allowed to move on. Atreyu and Kumori also moved forward with the exams. Neither of them had remorse for the ninja who wouldn't have helped Atreyu or Kumori in the event that they were attacked before him. And they probably wouldn't have helped him if they found him before he was eaten. The third exam was not held for about a month. During this month, they trained their hardest together. Then, came the day of reckoning. The final exam, the fighting exam, where ninjas will be put up against each other to fight to the top. Seven ninja made it to the finals. Two teams of two, and an entire team of three. One team of two was from the Hidden Sand. The other ninja team was from the Cloud Village.

The matchups were made. Kumori was matched up against a ninja from the Hidden Sand village. He was not very excited, until he saw who was directly after that. Provided he won his battle, Kumori could be battling Atreyu in the third exam. Kumori entered battle with Sand Ninja. This ninja was special. He was from a clan in the Sand Village, and his Kekkei Genkai was the ability to use glass jutsu. Using shards of broken glass, or glass Genjutsu, with Kumori's Sharingan, he could see through his Glass based Genjutsu, and view reality. Unknown to every person watching the Chuunin Exams right now, Kumori was a user of the Sharingan. Nobody, except him and Atreyu, along with Root ANBU, knew he had Sharingan. He intended to keep it that way.

He used the Sharingan when Glass was built around him, and a Genjutsu was used to make him believe he was in a maze, and disorient him. Kumori played along, and then took him out. Atreyu succeeded in defeating the enemy Cloud ninja, and the two were put into battle right after eachother. It was the last battle of the exams, after a few other ninja battled it out. The exams were almost over. Both of these ninja wanted to pass the Chuunin exams, and they would have to compete to do it. The faced each other in the arena, and decided to have some fun with this battle. Both of them were strong. Kumori was an all around good fighter, with decent Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and speed and strength. Atreyu was a very good user of Taijutsu, and he was very good at in combat Ninjutsu/Fuuinjutsu. A specialty jutsu of his involved him moving his hand along his enemy in a certain way, and if he succeeded with the jutsu, the limb he used the jutsu on would numb.

The two had a good battle, and, surprisingly, in the end, Atreyu was victorious over Kumori in combat. However, despite Kumori's loss to Atreyu, both ninja were promoted to Chuunin. After the Chuunin Exams, the two ninja were once again under Root. This time, however, they were put into Root ANBU training, which all Root ANBU members were trained under. They would be trained under the ninja arts for a long time. Kumori was an eleven year old Chuunin, and Atreyu was eleven now. They spent years training, their bond strong. It wasn't before the two of them had ascended to Jounin Rank, and became very strong. However, before the two of them could reach their full potential. As the Root ANBU teachings continued, they began to get Kumori. His personality was heavily influenced by them, and Kumori evicted his emotions from his body. Slowly, Kumori and Atreyu drifted apart.

Eventually, Root ANBU was being purged by the Hidden Leaf Village. The ways of the Root ANBU were unacceptable to the rest of Konoha, and it was ordered that the compounds and entire of complex of Root ANBU be invaded, and flushed out. It was a Diaspora. The Root ANBU no longer had any power in Konoha at all, and members of it dispersed. Kumori himself decided to take this opportunity to leave Konoha altogether. He was never a true Konoha ninja, but he was still a Missing Ninja. He drifted into Kumogakure to try and carry out his plans.

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Skill Specialty:
Dominant: Taijutsu, Intelligence
Recessive: Genjutsu, Element Attuned

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant: Fire
Recessive: Earth

Stat Points Total points: 34.5
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 5
Genjutsu: 4
Intelligence: 4
Force: 4
Speed: 5
Stamina: 5
Seal Knowledge: 3.5


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Post by Kiyoshi Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:39 pm

Ok, before you keep going, PLEASE post up your WIP in the basket. It's not just you so I'm not picking on you, but there's a rule that's been posted twice yet alot of ppl don't abide by it.

[Btw, Suna's currently closed for the time being]
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:22 pm

Finished. It was rushed so I could finish it today, but it's finally freaking finished.
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Post by Marixia Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:26 pm

If you have Chakra Control your stamina has to be 3.5

You do not have Genjutsu as a specialty so the highest you can't have a 5 there

State which skills and dominant and recessive

Kiyoshi needs to approve you of being a Kumo Jounin
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Post by Kiyoshi Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:31 pm

1. You need Taijutsu as a recessive for level 4. (Though I don't feel like enforcing that so w/e)

2. You can't have 3 elements since you're not elemental

3. You can't have 5 in speed without Taijutsu as your dominant.

4. You're approved for Jounin of Kumo.
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:47 pm

*facedesk*

I edited. Hopefully, it's good now.
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Post by Kiyoshi Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:09 pm

Ummm, you sort of deleted most of the stats.
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:28 pm

And so I sort of did...*secondary head desk followed by concussion*

They're there now.
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Post by Kiyoshi Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:47 pm

Seriously don't know why someone didn't get on this

Taijutsu needs to be dominant for level 5.

(Recessives give you up to level 4, Dominants give you up to level 5)
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:51 pm

*wallfist*

Edited.
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Post by Marixia Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:55 pm

Intelligence is blank lol
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Post by Hatake Tane Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:13 pm

Skill Specialty:
Dominant: Taijutsu, Intelligence
Recessive: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Dominant: Fire
Recessive: Earth

Stat Points Total points: 35
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 5
Genjutsu: 4
Intelligence:
Force: 4
Speed: 5
Stamina: 5
Seal Knowledge: 3.5

Since you have a lot of points and really no wiggle, room, your speed and stamina don't have to be a five, just the taijutsu part does. You dont need to be equally strong in those areas if you have taijutsu as a five. Just saying. 35 is a lot of points for someone that isn't a Kage. You qualify for every bit of it, but I just wanted to clear that up.
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:32 pm

....

Edited...

*goes to lie down*
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Post by Hatake Tane Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:57 pm

Approved
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:24 pm

I changed my one of my specialties from Ninjutsu to Element Attuned, so this has to be approved again.
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Post by Kiyoshi Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:30 pm

Approved.
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:02 pm

Also, since I have element attuned as a specialty, I'm allowed three elements, if I'm not mistaken, so I put Fuuton as my second recessive.
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Post by lifeanddeath Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:04 pm

No, you can only have two elements at creation, the third must be learned through RPing
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Post by Keiteki Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:06 pm

Oh. Okey dokey then.
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