Hyouden Terakoishi

No, I meant this

Well, the character can be approved, but the bloodline would basically be restricted until approved. Also, if you explain the variation in detail (perhaps post it in the bloodline section), then I may have a better understanding of it then I could approve it.

Considering that you have elemental as a specialty, you can have two elements, but as for both dominant, I will get back to you on that after talking with the head mod, but go ahead and leave em as dominant.

Well,I'll definitely post my bloodline in bloodline section when I'm finished with it.
And that guy who posted snow technique didn't have kekkei genkai so i think that was the main problem there and that's why he didn't get approval.
It seems it will take some time to make my character happen.
Thanks for your patience and help and for making everything clear.

It's quite fine. Alright, after speaking with the head mod, you can have wind and water, but you'll have to train for ice (Which I can help you with once you want to start rping), you also need to lower your speed to 3 at the most. After that you're character is ready for approval.

That's nice. I made the changes. But why do I have to lower my speed? Is it because of my rank?

Partially, it's also because you don't have Taijutsu nor Kenjutsu as a specialty.

So taijutsu and kenjutsu influence speed? Then the only way to have speed at 5 would be to have speciality of kenjutsu or taijutsu?

Yes. Like Rock Lee. He had high speed. He also was training under a taijutsu specialist.

Well that's fine. It seems I didn't study stat system enough...

Most people don't, but we can't hold that against you. All we do is help explain.

Your patience is a really good thing for those like me who don't have good concentration. Thank god for this feature of yours!

No problem. The mods will work with you and help get your character approved. I'm kind of busy RPing, but if there is anything you need to edit, do so and make sure it's done so we can approve. I'll ask Kiyoshi what else he had in mind unless he posts here, since he was the one handling most of your application.

Don't worry though, the application is some what rough because we want to fit everyone into Naruto as they would be in the manga for a better RP experience. Just work with us and we will work with you.

Well, everything checks out in my book.

As a future reference, try to place a space after every sentence to make it look better.

And we've all been new to rping (I think Im the newest one here) so we know what it's like to be confused.

But yeah, you're approved.

Nice... Thanks for the tip, I'm already working on it.

And thanks for all the help making everything smooth. Now I can finally go to sleep.

Would it be possible to little reedit this char and change dominant speciality: chakra control into genjutsu?

Oh god lord, you're the 3rd person to ask today.

Fine, go ahead.

What can I say people first create characters and only then techniques and when they find that techniques they want to use are not usable because of speciality they change the speciality.

Conclusion: it can't be helped.

Finally... Edited and finished.

If Kiyoshi is still OK with you being Genin (Which I think he is), this is approved.

Approved