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Post by Jeff Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:13 pm

Name: Rin Fuudoku
Nickname/Alias: N/a
Age: 14
Age Appearance: 15
Appearance: Rin Fuudoku(Finished) 247d631
Gender: Female
Rank: D
Ninja Rank: Genin
Village: Kumogakure no Sato
Birthplace: Unnamed villaged located in the lightning country.
Previous Village: Yes, small unnamed village somewhere in the lightning country.
Clan/Bloodline: N/a

Personality: Rin Fuudoku is a cruel, young women. Less caring than she is kind, she often perferes self preservation over all others. She is a vengeful person, wanting to be all powerful. Her past is scarred with torture, beatings and other unamusing things. Being said, she is not mentally stable. She is also scarred with a fear or being in a small, enclosed area. That doesn't mean she's closterphobic. She has a fiery passion for battle, and enjoys toying with her opponent. Anyone who can become her friend earns her trust, and inspires her to become stronger.

Goals: Becoming a S-ranked missing-nin wanted by everyone, a real big goal.
Alignment: Bad
Canon Personality: N/a
History:
.:Life begins with a sad tale, Rin Fuudoku!:.
Spoiler:

.:A toast to freedome, without limits! Rin arrives in Kumogakure no Sato!:.
Spoiler:

.:The present, 4 years later!:.
Spoiler:

RP Sample: (Would I need to do this for the second time?)


Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu
Dominant: Ninjutsu
Recessive:
Elemental Affinity: Water
Dominant: Water
Recessive[/u][/i]:
Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 1
Genjutsu: 2
Intelligence: 3
Force: 1
Speed: 3
Stamina: 3
Seal Knowledge: 1

[D Ranks should have anywhere between 18-13 points in total.]


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Post by Marixia Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:36 pm

Stopping ya before you get to far. For Genin (even though you put a C in your rank) your app will still be treated like you are going for a D rank genin.

That means you still only get one element, one specialty, and your stats must match a D-rank level.

Also, nothing is bolded and in italics. C/p the code beneath the app please.
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Post by Jeff Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:11 pm

*Bump*

Fixed problems Nasamea pointed out(ty) and finished the rest.
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Post by Marixia Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:06 pm

Approved.

May want to fix your spoiler tags btw.

EDIT: Ok, you didn't need his approval -_-


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Post by Jeff Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:08 pm

thanks again Nasamea. I fixed the tags.
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