Teki Murashima

Name:Teki Murashima

Age: 16

Bloodline:Hitosen'hiten( Ice Manipulation )
Rank:Genin
Classification:

Village:Hidden Leaf defect( Hidden Mist Village )

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: See Pic
Personality: Usually Cold, and Distant from Others,...When interested in
a fight he becomes sinister and Sadistic.

History: At the age of Thirteen Teki Was able, to reach the rank
of Jounin in The Hidden Leaf Village. When sent on an s-rank mission, he came to the conlusion that the Leaf, was weak... and that their strong moral government would eventually, Lead to The entire ninja world, becoming nothing more than a memory, through this Teki conspired against the Leaf by Purposely failing missions, and sabotaging the economy by Killing off other Jounin, and Black ops members... When found out
he quickly defected from the village and became a genin in the Hidden Mist, and worked his way up to Black ops agent

Specialty: Expert in Taijutsu, and Ninjutsu...with Moderate understanding of Genjutsu

Learned Jutsus:
Ice Manipulation techniques
Shadow of the wolf Encampment
Water Clone
Raging Ocean Serpent jutsu
Winds Of the Goddess
Hurricane Shuriken Technique
Grand Water Excavation
Giant Sink Hole Jutsu
Cystal Knight Jutsu

Elements: Water Element( Dominate) and Wind Element( recessive)
Weapons/items:
Two Long Katanas, and Black Glove with Three Crystal Claws

Goals: Increase in Power, Destruction of the Leaf Village

Ok some problems...

You don't fill the Classification out, that is for the admins to do.

You're rank says genin and yet in your history it says you are a jonin.
History requirements for a genin are at least 2 to 3 paragraphs and for Jonin it's at least 12 to 13 paragraphs, it's not that hard and do not be afraid to add as much detail. We love detail... a lot.

Alignment is whether you are good, neutral, or evil.

For elements, please state which element is dominate and which is recessive.

As for everything else, that is up to the mods and admins.


For some good examples just check out some approved characters in the Approved Characters section.

Okay I understand

But in my history, I was a jounin of the leaf ,
but know a genin of the Village hidden in the mist

so how many paragraphs would i need?

12-13

Regardless of whether you are a genin in mist

If you did not explain that you left with the consent of the village hidden in the leaf then you are considered a missing nin....regardless of whether you reside in Kirigakure or not

Name:Teki Murashima

Age: 16

Bloodline:Hitosen'hiten( Ice Manipulation )
Rank:Genin
Classification:

Village:Hidden Leaf defect( Hidden Mist Village )

Alignment: Evil

Appearance: See Pic
Personality: Usually Cold, and Distant from Others,...When interested in
a fight he becomes sinister and Sadistic.

History: Teki was born to merchants who settled in the Leaf village. At the age of five
teki desperately wanted to become a ninja.Though his Father continued to deny his wishes
Teki continued to plead day and night. One night the village was attacked by Five rogue ninjas
who in their assault, Killed Teki's parents before his Eye. Teki use the last bit of hi Savings to apply to the academy to become a ninja.

In the academy Teki declined any kind of friend ship.. only focusing on his
studies and becoming stronger. Teki at the age of Seven Developed his Own Just, which summoned a large ice wolf. This causes Teki to quickly be elevated to Genin and Placed in Squad 16. and being the only one to be allowed to take the chunin exams.He easily made his way to the Finals, and becoming a Chunin at the age of 8.

At Eleven Teki, was sent on his first mission to infiltrate the Hidden Mist village. Once
there he was forced to Fight off two Jounin nearly losing his life in the process, until he was saved by his Squad leader. Embarrassed Teki held a Grudge against his senior. Teki once exposed to the carnage with Kirigakure, grew a Liking to It.Teki's Leader notice this and became weary of the boy .

At the age of Thirteen Teki Was able, to reach the rank
of Anbu Black Ops in The Hidden Leaf Village. When sent on an s-rank mission, he came to the conlusion that the Leaf, was weak... and that their strong moral government would eventually, Lead to The entire ninja world, becoming nothing more than a memory. through this Teki conspired against the Leaf by Purposely failing missions, and sabotaging the economy by Killing off other Jounin, and Black ops members.When found out he quickly defected from the village and became a genin in the Hidden Mist.

Upon Becoming a genin, Teki Had already caught the Eye of the higher ups. Teki even though still of genin rank took on A rank missions over and over.Teki waned to become a chuni as soon as possible, but upon hearing that the exams would be held in konoha he declined. He promised himself not to go back to konoha until he was ready to carry out his plan. Due to this The Elders of kiri became suspicious of him.and Constantly had spies around him.

Teki evaded the Anbu with little effort. After escaping them and finding himself in Kiri's forest, he was approached by A man dressed in a black cloak. The Cloak was designed with red clouds, and he wore a
bright orange swirling mask. The with stunning speed Appear behind Teki and invited him to a secluded spot.Teki Reluctantly agreed.

Once there, the Man revealed himself to be Madara uchiha. Teki not surprised stated that madara died almost a century ago. The man Then stated that, who he is is irrelevent and that he shares the same goal as Teki, to destroy konoha. Teki then realizes that he is talking to a ghost. Teki then decides to fuse with the ghost to gain the sharingan.

Teki Approaches him and places his hand out. Madara then phases through his body
merging with. Teki is forced into agonizing pain, twisting and writhing on the Floor. Teki then awakened and
Activated his new Sharingan.

With the Sharingan Teki quickly caste a genjutsu two confuse the two anbu forcing them to leave him be.
With the sharingan, Teki also gained his wisdom, and realized that not even him alone would be able to take down the Village by himself.Teki for Days began organising the perfect plan.

at the age of fifteen, Teki was sent on a assassination
mission against the Leaf, were he was To Kill a Specific Jounin. the Mizukage
then gave him a photo of the Jounin. just before he left the Kage then gave him instructions not to look at the photo until arriving in the fire land, to which Teki Reluctantly agreed.

Upon arriving in the forest, and seeing the photo, teki was assigned to
kill his former sensei.Shunsui Jushiro. Though reluctant at first Teki remembers back to his days of
ridicule and begins Seek out his former master. Shunsui suddenly appears in the Forest, ready to Fight.

Shunsui states his disappointment inTeki, who bluntly ignores him. Shunsui then states that he will not back on a traitor, and gives him the chose to Leave or die.Teki Laughs at his comments. Teki then goes on to say that. That Leaf is weak and will Perish, as he reveals his sharingan. shunsui frightened Quickly grabs his sword.

Shunsui exhuasted uses all his strength to fight his former
pupil. Teki then reveals that since the moment he activated the sharingan Shunsui was caught in his illusion.
Shunsui trys to fight back, but Teki quickly disarms him literally. Shunsui layed bleeding giving his last speech to Teki. Teki coldly blocks out his swords and then decapitates him, Completely turning his back on konoha forever.


Specialty: Expert in Taijutsu, and Ninjutsu...with Moderate understanding of Genjutsu

Learned Jutsus:
Ice Manipulation techniques
Shadow of the wolf Encampment
Water Clone
Raging Ocean Serpent jutsu
Winds Of the Goddess
Hurricane Shuriken Technique
Grand Water Excavation
Giant Sink Hole Jutsu
Cystal Knight Jutsu

Elements: Water Element( Dominate) and Wind Element( recessive)
Weapons/items:
Two Long Katanas, and Black Glove with Three Crystal Claws

Goals: Increase in Power, Destruction of the Leaf Village

Not approved

One, you have not only the bloodline manipulation of ice but having the abilities of Madara Uchiha and his sharingan. Thats a no on many accounts.

Regardless of HOW many paragraphs you have, you show no detail into your history . Because of which, your classification will be (as of now) chunin level.