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Post by Nii Yamabushi Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:17 pm

Summoned Creature or Item: Gedou Mazou-Heretical Demon Statue

Appearance: This large earthly statue stands about 50 feet tall. The statue can be seen being blindfolded and having long arms which holds its upper body. The statue does not have legs, but keeps its mouth open.

Description: Nii can summon this large statue which can directly connect into the back of his body. Once connected, it can expell a spectral orange smoke which can remove the souls of anyone it passes through. This is possible because the strings that connect to Nii, would absorb Nii's astral ability to unleash Jirobo's astral form, causing him to power it's ability to unleash a fury of astral smoke which would cling onto a person's soul and detach it from their body.

However this ability does not kill the victim, it cause's them to fall into a tempararely coma until their soul can reach its body. It usually take's an hour for the slow moving soul to reach its body again. This statue is said to be related to the bound King of Hell statue Akatsuki uses.

Weakness: Although this statue has a powerful effect, it also has downsides. Once connected, Nii will be unable to perform any jutsu, let alone move. This summoning also takes up almost all of Nii's chakra, leaving him seriously fatigued in the process. Nii will also be immobilized for about 2 hours, due to the injuries of the strings that connected to him and his extreme amount of chakra lost. Basically, this summoning should only be used when there is a sure fact that Nii will have support after performing this.





Summoned Creature or Item: King of Hell Statue

Appearance: This large earthly statue stands about 100 feet tall. The statue can be seen being blindfolded and having long arms which holds them in the air as the Akatsuki members stand on each fingertip. The statue does not have legs, but keeps its mouth open.

Description: The Akatsuki organization uses the King of Hell statue to hold the bijuu it withdraws from captured Jinchuuriki. Nii can summon this statue wherever the group currently meets. Each time a bijuu is sealed within the statue, one of its nine eyes opens.

Weakness: To keep the statue from breaking from the power of the bijuu's, the bijuu must be sealed in the order of their tail count.


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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 7:35 pm

Not approved, too powerful.

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Post by Nii Yamabushi Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:11 pm

How so when Nagato had the SAME ability.
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:17 pm

Becasue Nagato was an over powered character, so is Naruto for that matterjust beacasue it is suitable in the manga, doesnt mean it is not to over powered here on the site. This has already been discussed numerous times. You see with this summoning, you could, right after that affect, simply flick your kunai, and kill them, with out shit they could do about it. Its quite simply not going to be allowed, and you may as well just accept that.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:28 pm

Allow me to rephrase my last post, state that you will be unable to move yourself for the next two hours and it will be acceptable, since their is no time stated, the time youd be unable to move could only be 1 minute based on its wording, and then could easily kill them and theyd have no deffenses, hence why it seems op. It is not I suppose with looking into it further, but the wording makes it appear that way, please just add the exact time frame you are unable to move afterwards, and about how much of your chakra it would take. Thank you.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:33 pm

Appologies for my oversights

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Post by Nii Yamabushi Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:37 pm

Updated. And its ok Taku.
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:43 pm

Add the exact time it takes for you to become mobile again, and it will be considere approved, make sure it states a longer time than one hour.

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Post by Nii Yamabushi Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:56 pm

Updated
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:59 pm

Approved

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Post by Kiyoshi Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:34 pm

Re-evaluation, knowledge of continuing use needed
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