Egress's Mangekyou Sharingan

Name of the Kekkei Genkai: Mangekyou Sharingan

Type of Kekkei Genkai: Doujutsu

Rank: S

Description: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Mangekyou Sharingan is a legendary doujutsu ability which has only emerged in a few clan members in its history. There is still mystery surrounding the eye and the Uchiha clan itself. Each user develops their own unique looking Mangekyou. The requirements for gaining the Mangekyou are very controversial in nature. After Uchiha Itachi murdered his best friend Shisui he gained Mangekyou. He told his younger brother Sasuke that to gain the Mangekyou, he too would have to kill his closest friend. Itachi told Sasuke that a scroll in their clan shrine revealed the true original purpose of the clan doujutsu. This scroll and Itachi himself revealed that the former leader of their clan, Uchiha Madara and his younger brother Izuna were the first to obtain Mangekyou. Madara himself did this by killing his friend, it's assumed Izuna also killed a close comrade.

Usage of the Mangekyou techniques drains quite a bit of a user’s chakra, more so than any other normal technique. Also as a result of Mangekyou usage, the bearer will slowly lose their vision. Madara lost his vision before his brother and sought to regain his power. To do so he removed Izuna's eyes and made them his own. With these new eyes, his Mangekyou took on a combined appearance of his original Mangekyou and Izuna's. These "Eternal" Mangekyou eyes returned his vision and gave him unbelievable strength. With this strength it was said Madara used Sharingan's normal ability to supress the Kyuubi and tame it.

Itachi originally told Sasuke that if he gained the Mangekyou, then there would be three people who could handle it. After the time skip in the series, Hatake Kakashi revealed he too had gained Mangekyou Sharingan. Later it was revealed that Uchiha Madara himself was still alive, and was the "third" user in Itachi's statement. What part, if any, that Kakashi and Uchiha Obito's eye plays has yet to be determined.

Weakness: From the moment the user awakens the Mangekyou Sharingan, they'll slowly start to lose their vision leading them to be completely blind. Also, the user's health can be damaged as well and large chakra supplies are needed to perform such forbidden and powerful techniques.

Mangekyou Image:

Spoiler:

Egress's Mangekyou Techniques:

Name of Jutsu: Yama (Enma)- God of the Underworld
Rank: S
Range: Close
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu/Ocular Genjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: N/A
Description: Yama/Enma, named for the Judge of the Dead, is a Mangekyou technique developed by Egress Uchiha that utilizes the left Mangekyou eye. Once the victim is caught in this illusion by eye contact, they'll be transported to a fiery world full of shadows with only a sign that says "Hell". A demon with the face of an ox with horns will appear as well as a large stand, the demon will have two hammers in his hand and will begin to judge the victim's soul. Once the demon slam the hammer in his left hand, images of the victim's past sins will emerge to them and they will actually renew that image again. They'll be haunted by past crimes and horrors that they never meant to commit, even feeling the pain of the people the victim kill or hurt. The illusion can cause the victim to scream in pain of what he's facing and begin to run away from their fears and nightmares. Once all the images slowly dissapear, the demon will slam the hammer in his right hand and judging from how many evil the victim has commited, it will show a terrifying picture of what a monster the victim will soon become and even how they'll die. The genjutsu would soon end and the victim will be back to reality, where only two seconds has passed since they've been caught in the illusion in the real world. The images causes a mental disorder or breakdown to the victim's mind and to make it collapse entirely, meaning they would be unable to move for several days.. or worse. Generally, shinobi would be paralyzed and knocked out unconscious for long periods of time (a minimum of 6 days if bedridden).

Weakness: Because this technique can take alot out of the user, for every 8 turns {ones made by the user} this jutsu is active, it subtracts -5% out of the user's vision. this technique also consumes alot of chakra and so if this technique is used more than twice a day, their vision will immediately start to get blurry for long periods of time. In Egress's case, he can use this technique up to six times before he entirely runs out of chakra and severely damages his eye health. There's also a way to defeat this technique. A skilled natural born (full blood) Uchiha with a fully matured Sharingan or a Mangekyou user who can use at least one of its special techniques can overcome this and inflict Egress a two post paralyzation effect.

Name of Jutsu: Raiden- God of Lightning and Thunder
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long ~ (0-10+)
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu/Ninjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: Lightning + Fire
Description: Raiden, named for the God of Lightning and Thunder, is a Mangekyou technique developed by Egress Uchiha that utilizes the right Mangekyou eye. This technique seems to be Egress's most favorite and personal jutsu. While in his Mangekyou form, Egress looks up towards the skies and can stimulate the electric particles inside the clouds. Then, he sends a strong heat-enhanced electrical wave towards the heavens in order to rapidly active them. He generally combines B-rank Katon chakra and B-rank Raiton chakra for the signal. As he does that, the stronger the chakra wave, the faster the thundercloud shall emerge. Egress's eyes's will begin to get bloodshot in the sclera, inflicting mental pain to himself. Egress can then generate a huge pure-red lightning bolt that will strike down from that very thundercloud onto whatever Egress is looking at next. Once the red lightning is releashed, whoever enemy that Egress is concentrated at is given a second at most on reacting to it. This red lightning bolt can heat up to 20,000 C and it has the ability to pierce most of the things it touches. Whenever the red lightning enters a human body, it can easily cut through flesh and neutralizes half of their nerves to limit their senses and ability to move. Although this red lightning bolt travels at the same speed of Kirin, the damage it causes is 1/3 of it and the enviromental destruction impact is the same as the Lightning Bolt technique, which is minimal. Shape manipulation of Raiden is very difficult if not impossible. because of the extreme intensity of Raiden, it's regarded as one of the highest levels of Lightning Release. Although it cannot be molded, it will follow whatever the caster wants to diminish until Raiden hits something. There're only a few certain techniques that could save a opponent from Raiden's might. Elemental techniques usually have a very low chance in defending from Raiden. Ulimately, if one gets hit by Raiden, they'll either be instantly be killed (if its a direct hit through the skull or a vital organ such as the heart or lungs), disability to move for long periods of time (four posts), have parts of their body completely blown off, or they'll loose massive amounts of blood.

Weakness: For every use of Raiden, it will subtract -1% off the user's vision. Also, it's best if this is not used for close range combat. Because this technique cannot be diminished, not even by the caster, Raiden would also affect the caster as well and if they do get hit by it, they'll most likely die or one of their body parts will be oblierated. Although, there's a strange way to counter this technique. If an enemy surrounds himself entirely with an armor of metal, Raiden will completely destory this metal armour except for the parts covering the naval and enemies will not be affected of this impact but they will however feel the violent and powerful force. Raiden also consumes large amounts of chakra. So in addition to having the user to rapidly burn out his/her chakra and eyes to be damaged, there's a limit on how many times the caster can use Raiden before no more chakra can be used. (In Egress's case, he could only use Raiden up to six times before he completely runs out of chakra.)

Name of Jutsu: Bishamon- God of War, Justice, and Law.
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu, Ninjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: N/A

Description: Bishamon, named for the God of War, is a Mangekyou technique used by Egress Uchiha utilizing both Mangekyou eyes. By weaving the Tora, Saru, Ushi, Mi handseals, Egress can produce a large stone tablet, arising from a portal from the Realm of the Dead, from the ground. This spiritual item called Bishamon's Law is a Kuchiyose technique as well. Egress writes the full name of a living person in blood on an open lined space in the tablet. Once he finishes, he also inserts an item that the living person owned or wore into a cube-like space just to the right of the name line. Once he does that, a light green chakra will erupt from the square to identify if the artifact matches the name of the person. If it does, the chakra will glow red. Egress places his hand onto that square and seals the artifact inside of the cube. At any point, he can use his Bishamon technique and summon the tablet again. By performing the needed handseals for Kuchiyose while his Sharingan is on, he then places his hand towards a cube where a name is listed, focuses a large amount of chakra to it, and can either teleport through space towards that person's location or transport that person towards his location using Reverse Summoning. The tablet will return back to its world as Egress appears in a puff of smoke or the designated target appears to him. People, other than the user, cannot erase the name or else they would just scratch their limbs. Bishamon's Law is said to be unbreakable so even though one has erased all names, slash long strikes, and shattered all of the barriers, Bishamon's Law would just crumble back to the earth where it would be reborn a day later, fully new but with nothing on it.

Weakness: Like other Mangekyou techniques, Bishamon consumes the user's eye vision but not so rapid. For each three uses of Bishamon, it subtracts -1% off of Egress's vision. Also, each time he does use Bishamon, his strength and stamina is also being reduced but not by alot. His flesh will turn grayer and if he does use Bishamon more than four times on a week, his flesh itself will start to detoleraite and he will soon grow into an old man. His strength and stamina will fully return to him if he dosen't suffer the extra descentment. Because he it requires twice as much as chakra Egress would need to perform his regular Kuchiyose or to conjour the Boss summon, he can only use Bishamon ten times daily before he runs out of chakra. Furthermore, the available amount of space for names is limited to only twenty spaces- ten on each side. In order to perform it, he cannot just write the last nor first name seperately from each other or else it won't work. He requires an item that the designated target has owned or worn in order to perform the Kuchiyose. The barrier protecting the clothing is only as strong as reinforced glass so an A-rank Ninjutsu technique or B-rank Taijutsu technique can shatter the shield and expose the clothing, in which people can remove so Egress cannot summon the person nor transport to them. A full, long, swift slash across the person's name disrupts the Kuchiyose technique and it dosen't have to be deep, just as long as the slash obstructs the name. Egress can then only summon to that person's location, but instead of arriving there, he would be forever trapped in space because of the disruption either until he finds an alternative portal to teleport to or finds the portal he wants all by himself. Egress can erase names at any point in order to free up more space to write more names, but once he does erase them, he cannot ever summon them or teleport to them ever again even if he re-writes it on the tablet. Finally, if he uses a regular Kuchiyose technique before he summons Bishamon, then he can only use Bishamon once per day.

correct

(For me, is there a specific amount of how many I can have?)

One left eye, one right eye, and a both eye technique (Like Itachi)

Or one really good technique for both eyes (like shisui, or my old one)

Wait question you know what I noticed... How many times do you use it before you lose ur eyes completely? Because once you use it so many times ur blind.... now how come it is never quite stated how long it takes to lose ur eyes with the mangekyou I think that should be stated...

Itachi had his Mangekyou for ten years almost..
Egress will be fine.

10 years? How long is that in rpg time? And what if he just didnt use it that much the times could very you should put up a specific on how many times you can use it before going blind and plus shouldn't the sight start to deteriate after a certain amount of uses? Oh and what about taking another mangekyou after you lost urs and gaining an "eternal" mangekyou without losing ur sight?

1. The damage if he uses it once won't be that much. It's a progressive thing. Even if he uses it a lot, his eyes are always in a slow descent of darkness. The more he uses it the quicker they descend. Itachi didn't use his a lot and managed to have it for 10 years, which is a long time in RP time. So if Egress uses it like Itachi did (moderately), he'll be fine.

2. If he finds another Sharingan user, he can steal their eyes (not an auto hit of course) and he he'll gain EMS and keep his techniques. If he finds another MS eyes he'll gain two MS techniques. Basically EMS is the same thing as MS except without the sight loss, meaning it still takes chakra and all of that.

3. It's good that you show concern, but don't post in Egress's topic when you have questions. If you have concerns, just PM a moderator about it, they are all willing to help you even if they are busy and can't get to your jutsu. :p

Don't even get me started on that they aren't busy they are ignoring my jutsu... I even fixed what they wanted me to fix! But w/e I dont have any jutsu and am almost defencless cause I got nothing but anyway good work with gaining mangekyou.

I've already added the countdown limit.... on how many posts the technique is active and a certain amount of eyesight is subtracted from me.. Just finishing up now...

Done!!!


I think....

*bump*

I'll start on this now. Give me a few.

Egress Uchiha wrote:
Egress's Mangekyou Techniques:

Name of Jutsu: Yama (Enma)- God of the Underworld
Rank: S
Range: Close
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu/Ocular Genjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: N/A
Description: Yama/Enma, named for the Judge of the Dead, is a Mangekyou technique developed by Egress Uchiha that utilizes the left Mangekyou eye. Once the victim is caught in this illusion by eye contact, they'll be transported to a fiery world full of shadows with only a sign that says "Hell". A demon with the face of an ox with horns will appear as well as a large stand, the demon will have two hammers in his hand and will begin to judge the victim's soul. Once the demon slam the hammer in his left hand, images of the victim's past sins will emerge to them and they will actually renew that image again. They'll be haunted by past crimes and horrors that they never meant to commit, even feeling the pain of the people the victim kill or hurt. The illusion can cause the victim to scream in pain of what he's facing and begin to run away from their fears and nightmares. Once all the images slowly dissapear, the demon will slam the hammer in his right hand and judging from how many evil the victim has commited, it will show a terrifying picture of what a monster the victim will soon become and even how they'll die. The genjutsu would soon end and the victim will be back to reality, where only two seconds has passed since they've been caught in the illusion in the real world. The images causes a mental disorder or breakdown to the victim's mind and to make it collapse entirely, meaning they would be unable to move for several days.. or worse. Usually, Genin or lower could die from this, while more experienced shinobi would be paralyzed and be knocked out for long periods of time.
Weakness: Because this technique can take alot out of the user, for every 15 turns {ones made by the user} this jutsu is active, it subtracts -5% out of the user's vision. this technique also consumes alot of chakra and so if this technique is used more than twice a day, their vision will immediately start to get blurry for long periods of time. In Egress's case, he can use this technique up to six times before he entirely runs out of chakra and severely damages his eye health. There's also a way to defeat this technique. A skilled natural born (full blood) Uchiha with Mangekyou Sharingan and can use at least one Mangekyou technique can activtae their own mangekyou to overcome this technique and counter it. The caster will then be paralyzed for two posts.

I really don't have a problem with this one except for the things in bold. 15 turns sounds like a lot... I would like to see at leas 7-10. Maybe a solid 9 for Egress since he's jounin Rank. About the illusion killing thing, change that to a long a coma. Sasuke got caught in Tsukuyomi from Itachi and has still lived on to see another day. He was around 6 at the time

Egress Uchiha wrote:Name of Jutsu: Raiden- God of Lightning and Thunder
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long ~ (0-10+)
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu/Ninjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: Lightning + Fire
Description: Raiden, named for the God of Lightning and Thunder, is a Mangekyou technique developed by Egress Uchiha that utilizes the right Mangekyou eye. This technique seems to be Egress's most favorite and personal jutsu. While in his Mangekyou form, Egress looks up towards the skies and can stimulate the electric particles inside the clouds. In just two seconds, a thundercloud shall emerge. Egress's eyes's will begin to get bloodshot in the sclera, inflicting mental pain to himself. Egress can then generate a huge pure-red lightning bolt that will strike down from that very thundercloud onto whatever Egress is looking at next. Once the red lightning is releashed, whoever enemy that Egress is concentrated at is given a second at most on reacting to it. This red lightning bolt can heat up to 20,000 C and it has the ability to pierce most of the things it touches. Whenever the red lightning enters a human body, it instantly cuts through every vein it touches and neutralizes every single nerve in the body- disabling their ability to move. Although this red lightning bolt travels at the same speed of Kirin, the damage it causes is 1/10 and the enviromental destruction impact is the same as the Lightning Bolt technique, which is minimal. Shape manipulation of Raiden is very difficult if not impossible. because of the extreme intensity of Raiden, it's regarded as one of the highest levels of Lightning Release. Although it cannot be molded, it will follow whatever the caster wants to diminish until Raiden hits something. There're only a few certain techniques that could save a opponent from Raiden's might. Elemental techniques usually have a very low chance in defending from Raiden. Ulimately, if one gets hit by Raiden, they'll either be instantly be killed, unable to move for long periods of time, have parts of their body completely blown off, or they'll loose massive amounts of blood.

Weakness: For every three uses of Raiden, it will subtract -1% off the user's vision. Also, it's best if this is not used for close range combat. Because this technique cannot be diminished, not even by the caster, Raiden would also affect the caster as well and if they do get hit by it, they'll most likely die or one of their body parts will be oblierated. Although, there's a strange way to counter this technique. If an enemy surrounds himself entirely with an armor of metal, Raiden will completely destory this metal armour except for the parts covering the naval and enemies will not be affected of this impact but they will however feel the violent and powerful force. Raiden also consumes large amounts of chakra. So in addition to having the user to rapidly burn out his/her chakra and eyes to be damaged, there's a limit on how many times the caster can use Raiden before no more chakra can be used. (In Egress's case, he could only use Raiden up to ten times before he completely runs out of chakra.)

I don't mind how fast the clouds form, the problem is that the clouds should at least be set up. All it would take is some heat to get the clouds going, then you can use your eye to stimulate the clouds electricity. I have to say no to a thundercloud just popping out of the sky in just two seconds. So let's add the fact that you'd have to warm up the atmosphere like Sasuke did before you can even begin the technique.

If it cut the veins you'd die instantly. So how about you change that to nerves. You can say the nerve impulses get overloaded from the massive amount of electricity surging through the body which causes them to shut down for about three to four posts. That would make anyone immobile. To cut through the veins is asking a lot. Plus, since the lightning is very hot, it would also give the opponent some burns at the same time. This way, if it hits you can still go into the kill move. An opponent would be a sitting duck, not even able to perform a Kawarimi. (Basically they'd end up in the same state Kakuzu was in after Rasen-Shuriken, except add burns to their body)

Sasuke was only able to pull of Kirin one time, so I'd like to either see you drop three uses to two, or add a vision loss percent by one or two. How about dropping 10 times to maybe 6-8. This is assuming you'd already be expending chakra before you used this technique.

Egress Uchiha wrote:Name of Jutsu: Bishamon- God of War, Justice, and Law.
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long
Type of Jutsu: Doujutsu, Ninjutsu
Users: Egress Uchiha
Element Affinity: N/A

Description: Bishamon, named for the God of War, is a Mangekyou technique used by Egress Uchiha utilizing both Mangekyou eyes. By sonsuming large amounts of chakra, Egress can conjour up an army of one-hundred undead samurai skeletons from the ground. Egress can summon this army only from within a 25 meter radius. The bone structures of these skeletons have an adamant density that could absorb up to elemental enhanced metal projectiles. In exchange of this, they have several weak points all over the body that are left unprotected and even sufficient force is applied to it, they'll be able to shatter and crumble the samurai in just one blow. Because these skeletons were all once samurai in the world of the living, they all are able to utilize their own special way of chakra utilization and also possess the same swords they had while they were alive. Although it might seem as this technique can be used for offensive means and an extension of the user, it's actually useful in defense purposes and is excellent for making a retreat. However, these skeletons do have weak areas and limitations on lifespan. Weapons made out of steel will not be able to pierce through the skeleton's super-hardened bones but any weapons hard as diamond or A-rank ninjutsu/taijutsu will be able to shatter these bones.

Weakness: Like other Mangekyou techniques, Bishamon consumes the user's eye vision but not so rapid. For each time Egress uses Bishamon is a direct -1% subtraction from his vision, so using this move is quite lethal not only to multiple enemies but to the user himself. Egress could only use Bishamon one-hundred times before going completely blind. If he overuses it more than three times a day, for each additional use is a direct -4% out of their vision. A-rank or higher ninjutsu or taijutsu can easily shatter the skeleton's adamant bones as well as a triple elemental enhanced metal attack. Also, these skeletons only have a maximum lifespan of ten days and if they all have to be within a 100 meter radius of where their caster is. If they're not within this radius, they'll immediately disperse to nothing but dust. If a skeleton is on its tenth day of survival, their bones will no longer be adamant and they'll revert back to normal bones from which they'll soon vanish. Also, they have five weak spots in which a normal attack to it shall entirely destroy the skeleton. (However, E-D ranks will not be able to breach through these weak spots) There are:

Spoiler:

Here's the problem. Anytime you resurrect something dead, you have to give it chakra do strengthen it and to move. This technique would already take a crap load of chakra from you upon summoning. So an added weakness could be that you can't use a certain amount of chakra or jutsu while this is in play. Plus, for them to use their chakra abilities, you'd also have to supply the chakra for that also. Now all of this is being pushed through your eyes, so there'd be some serious damage done to your eyes. Summoning dead things don't last too long in the real world and it would take chakra to keep them alive for 10 days. That's a week and little under a half. So shorten that time span up to maybe 1-2. I know that's a drastic loss from 10 days, but it's not like these creatures have a body which you can give chakra to and give them substance. You're creating everything from this technique entirely from chakra. Also, 100 meters is pretty far, I'd sum it up to about a good 60-75 meters. You're talking about control of all these skeletons for the size of a football field roughly.

These will be denied until we get some changes, but don't be discouraged. If you get something in mind or you want to debate it then that's fine by me.

Yama (Enma)- Changed, Changed to an overall outcome

Raiden- Re-editted, changed, opps- i had added the wrong thing. Changed.


Bishamon- Effect has been changed completely.


In response to Aki:

Changed to the certain conditions...


No because Katon chakra is also enhanced to it so it would overcome the Fuuton technique as a Fuuton-enhanced Katon technique would overcome Suiton. Also I highly doubt that natural lightning in this case would have been counted to be weak against Fuuton Ninjutsu. So Raiden- a Katon-enhanced natural lightning technique qould be able to overcome most jutsus.


The triple elemental metal attack is basically three chakra elements combined to one metal technique. For example: the Chidori Blade- in which it focuses Raiton towards a metal sword. When one adds Raiton, Katon, AND Fuuton to a metal sword is what I meant by a triple elemental enhacned metal attack... but now that no longer matters since I changed the effects of Bishamon.

I've added how many times (at full chakra) he can use each tech...

Seems fine to me. I think you know what you are doing. Aki do you still have any points that you want to cover?

Well even though the forum is fucked up.

I approve this.