Kirikae

Name of the Kekkei Genkai: Kirikae [Conversion]

Type of Kekkei Genkai: Futton [Boil Release]

Rank: A/S?

Description: The actual Kekkei Genkai itself is the ability to store chakra-based water in a secondary 'stomach' of sorts which is located just behind and below the actual stomach. This is refilled in the same way as the body is, by drinking, but seems to be able to hold much, much more than the actual stomach or bowel's can. This extra stomach is almost constantly filled with a mixture of the clan-member's special chakra and typical water which is purified through their bodies own specialised processes.

The Kirikae clan has the ability to have their second stomach act as a heat-proof boiling pot of sorts. Then, the user can release the boiled liquid out through an orifice [hopefully the mouth..] in the form a super-heated, boiling corrosive acid which, in the hands of a skilled shinobi has the ability to melt near anything it touches. Thus, the bloodline can be used by any rank of shinobi as a powerful offence, though lower-ranked shinobi using it might probably burn themselves as much as the enemy.

The final ability of the Kirikae bloodline is that of a very weakened sensing ability. This ability allows the clan-member to sense a person by their body heat, though it also, and is mainly used to make sure the controller of the jutsu is at a speccific body heat, so as not to become too hot through use of Futton chakra, which itself is super-heated. Though, when trained, the can use the ability to track an opponent over specific area's.

Weakness: Because of the fact that the jutsu of the Kirikae bloodline heats the body as a means of boiling, the user can finds themselves coming down with multiple adverse affects pertaining to heat. If used too much throughout a short period by a shinobi who is untrained in the clan's bloodline, then the shinobi can easily find themselves with Heat stroke, Heat syncope, or when used constantly for a specific period of time [I.E In a war for days at a time] severe Radiation Burns and Poisoning. A small side-effect of their heat ability is also that, because of the large expelling of gasses within their body, the bloodlne user seems to have qutie a few cases of severe heartburn. [Owie. >.>]

The weakness of the heat-sensing ability of the bloodline is that, unless the user is specifically trained to master the heat-seeking abilities, and none of the other bloodline jutsu, then the user can only sense heat itself and the general area it is coming from, and a specific area [of about 50 foot or so] if they are actually IN that general area. They cannot, however, distinguish a specific heat from a group of similarly-heated beings, so if a group of shinobi who are tired and have traveled constantly sit in a field, the user can sense that there are five being's in the area, but if they are in a specific position such as a large circle and their heat rises as one, they would appear as one source of heat.

[I'll create the clan page as soon as I can, which will probably be when this is accepted. That is, IF it is. Ooh..wonder if anyone would join o.o]

1st-
This is two kekegenkais in one, big no no.

2nd-
Sensing someone or something from so far away seems a bit... much, considering all the sources of heat between you and that other person or thing.
Wouldn't the other sources get in the way, no matter how high the heat may be?
I mean normal body temperature is 98.6
Lets say you take 10 humans and stick them in a room (all having that temp). If all you can sense is heat, without looking, how would you be able to pick that one human from the ten when all the heat sources are roughly the same? Now in a different country, ohhhh boy good luck there lol
I mean if you just kept it to sensing heat within a certain range, or just in general, that seems more reasonable to me.

1st -
It's not two kekkai genkai in one. Actually, it's quite the opposite, if you read it correctly. It's really the same thing using a different element to heat or cool the liquid for the use of jutsu. As stated in the post at the start, the real Kekkai Genkai is actually the ability to keep the water within their 'second stomach', and the two releases just came after as a means of combat. And I saw nothing saying not to use two Kekkai Genkai, in fact the Fifth Mizukage uses two, Boil Release and Lava Release.

2nd-

I couldn't say the senser could pinpoint the person's exact location. They would just know either somebody just used a damned good katon jutsu or a village is currently alight somewhere that-a-way. They wouldn't know exactly WHERE in the country it was. And I did say that only somebody who was immensely powered like Madara Uchiha could ever hope to pick up on something like that, and even then it would still be only something like "Wow, did somebody just blow up a hillside or something?" they wouldn't exactly know where it was, just that a huge heat was caming from there. But, fine, if you think that bits too op'ed, I'll tone it down.

You agree that you use a set of elements to create a new type of element, then use another set of elements to create another element?

You're using water and fire to make steam
Then using water and lightning to make cloud

Those are two different new elements, which means you have two Kekkei Genkai.

In a round about way you actually have three, because you say the actual Kekkei Genkai is the ability to keep water within the second stomach.

I don't know about the boil element, I could let you have that but that would have to be the only thing you have, and you'd have to be from the mist village. Since it just came out we don't know much about it, neither do we currently have the time to re-analyze the manga and create acceptable jutsu for it.

I love Boil release! *random fanboy squeel. Now how in the hell did I get that high o.o..* I was actually working on figuring out a way to make it one element with a Heat side and Cold side, which I thought was pretty awesome >.>

But anywho, I'll change it to boil release. I'ma use the second-stomach thingy anyway, it'd be easier to use the jutsu through such a system as that anyway.

**EDIT**: Aaand, edited. xD And I'd love to create some jutsu for it. Shouldn't be too hard. I love to make jutsu anyway ^-^

omg if you create some jutsu for it I'll love you. No homo

Seriously I haven't had the time to create some jutsu for it, but if you do it, we can both go over them and make some appropriate jutsu for them because I was going to let some of the jounin mist NPC's (a few) have boil release.

The reason why we don't allow things half the time is because we don't have the time analyze them and write them up. But if you write them up it'll make the process a heck of a lot easier on me, since I'm usually the one that opens more bloodlines and abilities on the site.

Sorry for the double post, but before I approve this make sure you edit these few bits out.

The final ability of the Kirikae bloodline is that of a very weakened sensing ability. This ability allows the clan-member to sense a person by their body heat, though it also, and is mainly used to make sure the controller of the jutsu is at a speccific body heat, so as not to become too hot through use of Yugeton chakra, which itself is super-heated, or too cold through the use of Kumeton jutsu. Though, when trained, the can use the ability to track an opponent over specific area's.

Edited. I was kinda rushing that as I had to get out. I have time now though, so I'll create a bit of a profile for the clan and make up a clan page now. I'll make some jutsu up with it, and there's nothing wrong with being 'homo', thankyuverehmuch! >.> *coughhintcough* XD

I'll try and make a description of what each rank should [I stress the word SHOULD! because of the fact that a genin could be chuunin+ level with clan jutsu, or academy rank with clan jutsu] be able to do and what clothes they usually where to..you know..occasions and..crap. XD

Approved for now. And remember to bump. Idk why I didn't see this on the tenth.

Ok The tenth was tuesday for me and I was napping a lot due to the fact that my boss didn't want me to work