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Post by Techi Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:41 am

Character Information
Name: Fujiwara, Techi
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Techi has an indescribable skin color, seeing as it isn’t too dark and not too light. He’s rather short, and muscular. He stands at around 5’5 inches and weighs around 136, of almost pure muscle. He’s very fit, and acrobatic. He always has stylish leather gloves that he uses to conceal the extra mouths on his palms. [It’s impossible to see the mouths through the fabric of the glove, so don’t even try.] He keeps his sword, Hakumei, sheathed on his right side. Also, he has a medium sized mouth on each palm, a rather large mouth on his chest, and an incredibly small mouth in his bellybutton.

Techi also has the most beautiful blue eyes, you’ll probably ever see. His black hair perfectly shrouds his eyes, seeing as the banes drop down to his cheek. Another distinct feature he possesses is his admirable collar bones. They’re almost perfectly installed into his body. Anyone who considers the appearance down to the last detail would notice his perfect collar bones.
Note: See Avatar for specific details.

Personality: Techi ‘s personalities don’t match each other at all. For instance, at times, Techi is extraordinarily lazy, and it’ll take a pretty high ranked ninja to force him to do something. But in battle situations, he always packs as much as he can, and processes every battle movement through his brain. When battling, he is very strategic and energetic. Even though he utilizes his sculpting skills a lot, he absolutely hates art. He is particularly talented in this department, but he never could find it interesting.

As far has happy and angry goes, Techi will always appear gleeful to you. Even if he is at one of his most depressed moments, he will portray himself as a happy child. Again, it takes an observant ninja to see through his mirages of expressions. Also, he isn’t a very shy person. If he sees something/someone of interest to him, he will surely go engage in conversation/combat. A bad thing about his emotions is that he can get rather bossy when battling with teammates, seeing as he thinks his plans are always the right way to go.

Village
Rank: Advanced Genin
Current Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Classification: Roleplay Sample Here
Alignment: Hidden Evil

Element
Chakra Capacity & Control: 2 - 3
Dominant: Fuuton
Jutsu: Jutsu List

Specialty:
Dominant:Ninjutsu
Recessive:Kenjutsu

Weapons
+ Pouch and Hakumei

+ Scope
History

Birth: Techi has had a very difficult life, since his birth. Immediately after noticing the easily noticeable mouths on his body, his family disowned him. He was forced into a foster family, where they trained him nonstop in his ninja abilities. His foster father, Shizu, wasn’t one to practice in the art of Kenjutsu, but he made an exception for Techi, which readied him for Hakumei. At the age of ten, Techi entered the Academy.

Academy: Techi always kept his extra mouths a secret, with the use of black leather gloves. He attempted to use them as a fashion statement, but it was really to keep his dark secret a secret. His grades in the Academy were beautiful, but he never cared to graduate. He wanted to know all the basics as an Academy Student before he proceeded to the rough life as a Genin. Also he wanted to prepare himself mentally, for the many insults that were to come. His life has been severely lonely up until now, seeing as he wanted to keep his secret a secret. He heard one of the past Kazekages possessed his same problem, but he decided to neglect it. Anger and loneliness was building up at a very young age, but he's always fought it. Eventually, he graduated from the Academy with his standard A’s, due to his photographic memory.

Genin: The day Techi exited the Academy, Shizu concealed a gift behind his back for him. Techi had no idea what the gift was, seeing as he thought no one cared for his life. Shizu moved the sword from behind him, allowing Techi to see a gold-stained sword with a black hilt. Within it held a green emblem, which glistened in the light. It didn’t take him long to master the sword, Hakumei, seeing as he had been practicing Kenjutsu since birth. He harnessed his skills, kept his extra mouths a secret, and patiently awaited a squad.

Goals: Techi’s goals aren’t to any extreme, he just wishes to become an Anbu, possibly even leader.
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Extra: I moved a lot of stuff around, and deleted things that don’t affect my character whatsoever. Also, if you hadn’t noticed by now, I have techniques much like Deidara. Seeing as his techniques aren’t clan techniques, I feel no clan registration is necessary. It’s just explosive chakra…


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Post by Techi Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:43 am

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Post by Kiyoshi Thu Nov 26, 2009 10:52 am

Well, for starters, the link to your Rp sample doesn't work (probably because some of the letters are missing)

You have to place your jutsu list in the jutsu section. If you want, I can split it over there so you don't have to c/p the whole thing.

Gennin can only have one element.

When you start as a Gennin, you would be D rank until someone teaches you IC, etc.

The average for chakra capacity/control would be 2-3 for a Gennin unless you were a Bijuu host (in which case, you're capacity would be 3-4 and your control would be 1-2)

The Deidara's jutsu are secret nontheless so I'm not sure about the mouths. You'd have to get permission from an admin for that.
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Post by Techi Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:14 pm

Kiyoshi, it's the topic with me and Aoiharu, the arc. You can just read it there...

Everything else I edited to your perfection.
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Post by Kiyoshi Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:36 pm

One element and your good
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Post by Techi Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:45 pm

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Post by Kiyoshi Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:48 pm

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