Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
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Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
Name: Rin Fuudoku
Nickname/Alias: N/a
Age: 14
Age Appearance: 15
Appearance:
Gender: Female
Rank: D
Ninja Rank: Genin
Village: Kumogakure no Sato
Birthplace: Unnamed villaged located in the lightning country.
Previous Village: Yes, small unnamed village somewhere in the lightning country.
Clan/Bloodline: N/a
Personality: Rin Fuudoku is a cruel, young women. Less caring than she is kind, she often perferes self preservation over all others. She is a vengeful person, wanting to be all powerful. Her past is scarred with torture, beatings and other unamusing things. Being said, she is not mentally stable. She is also scarred with a fear or being in a small, enclosed area. That doesn't mean she's closterphobic. She has a fiery passion for battle, and enjoys toying with her opponent. Anyone who can become her friend earns her trust, and inspires her to become stronger.
Goals: Becoming a S-ranked missing-nin wanted by everyone, a real big goal.
Alignment: Bad
Canon Personality: N/a
History:
.:Life begins with a sad tale, Rin Fuudoku!:.
.:A toast to freedome, without limits! Rin arrives in Kumogakure no Sato!:.
.:The present, 4 years later!:.
RP Sample: (Would I need to do this for the second time?)
Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu
Dominant: Ninjutsu
Recessive:
Elemental Affinity: Water
Dominant: Water
Recessive[/u][/i]:
Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 1
Genjutsu: 2
Intelligence: 3
Force: 1
Speed: 3
Stamina: 3
Seal Knowledge: 1
[D Ranks should have anywhere between 18-13 points in total.]
Nickname/Alias: N/a
Age: 14
Age Appearance: 15
Appearance:
Gender: Female
Rank: D
Ninja Rank: Genin
Village: Kumogakure no Sato
Birthplace: Unnamed villaged located in the lightning country.
Previous Village: Yes, small unnamed village somewhere in the lightning country.
Clan/Bloodline: N/a
Personality: Rin Fuudoku is a cruel, young women. Less caring than she is kind, she often perferes self preservation over all others. She is a vengeful person, wanting to be all powerful. Her past is scarred with torture, beatings and other unamusing things. Being said, she is not mentally stable. She is also scarred with a fear or being in a small, enclosed area. That doesn't mean she's closterphobic. She has a fiery passion for battle, and enjoys toying with her opponent. Anyone who can become her friend earns her trust, and inspires her to become stronger.
Goals: Becoming a S-ranked missing-nin wanted by everyone, a real big goal.
Alignment: Bad
Canon Personality: N/a
History:
.:Life begins with a sad tale, Rin Fuudoku!:.
- Spoiler:
Born in an un-named village, Rin's parents were cruel, horrible parents. Rin never knew of a good time in her past. rin's parents kept her in, forced her to read at a very young age aswell. She never knew what sunshine was. Because she was too young to understand, her parents truely desired to kill Rin. They thought Rin was useless because she looked so innocent. But the brutal beatings, cuts and harmfull attacks changed her. She never always had red eyes.
Her eyes changed one fatal day. It was her 5th birthday. She never had anything. No love, no toys. Just books and food her parents gave her. Rin had read for hours while being alone. Wandering around her home, she found a knife. On her right arm, she cut deep gashes in several spots. Her parents got home later, finding Rin not home. It turned out she had been taken to the hospital by neighbours. The village decided Rin be sent away. They sent Rin to grandparents she never knew about.
.:A toast to freedome, without limits! Rin arrives in Kumogakure no Sato!:.
- Spoiler:
Rin, had packed things, and was pick up by a cousin from Kumo. He took her away from her young life, taking her to kumo. Apon arriving, Rin met her grandparents. She instantly hated them. They were always looking out for her. Unlike how she was first raised, her grandparents tried to show Rin loved, but Rin would never understand. After a few more years of living in Kumogakure no Sato, Rin was enrolled in the acdemy on her own free will.
She did excellent in it. Besides the fact that she often got in trouble, picking fights and beating up other students, Rin had excellent grades. She even tried to fight her own teacher. But she was sent home. She would often laugh at the pathetic attempts of others(as she put it), and would show off. She enjoyed being mean. Her grandparents thought it was just a stage she was going through. But they weren't even close. Rin's parents acclomplished what they wanted. It took them 5 years to create a mentally unstable child, and ill-tempered.When she passed and graduated from the academy, she had one team. But they failed their bell test ad half the team was killed on a C ranked mission. Rin and her sensei hated each other, so the end was close. She ignored him and went into secret training. She would show them what a 10 year old girl was going to become.
.:The present, 4 years later!:.
- Spoiler:
4 years while training in secret, Rin had learned plenty to fill herself with knowledge about the world's current afairs. She had also found out she had an affinity to water. Happy with her current state, Rin had also changed her look greatly. She now carries the scars on her right arm as a red tatto. Still a genin however, she looks onward towards the all too near future.
RP Sample: (Would I need to do this for the second time?)
Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu
Dominant: Ninjutsu
Recessive:
Elemental Affinity: Water
Dominant: Water
Recessive[/u][/i]:
Stat Points
Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 1
Genjutsu: 2
Intelligence: 3
Force: 1
Speed: 3
Stamina: 3
Seal Knowledge: 1
[D Ranks should have anywhere between 18-13 points in total.]
Last edited by U on Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:08 pm; edited 4 times in total
Jeff- Konoha Chunnin
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Join date : 2010-01-27
Re: Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
Stopping ya before you get to far. For Genin (even though you put a C in your rank) your app will still be treated like you are going for a D rank genin.
That means you still only get one element, one specialty, and your stats must match a D-rank level.
Also, nothing is bolded and in italics. C/p the code beneath the app please.
That means you still only get one element, one specialty, and your stats must match a D-rank level.
Also, nothing is bolded and in italics. C/p the code beneath the app please.
Marixia- Kumo Chuunin
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Join date : 2009-07-14
Age : 31
Re: Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
*Bump*
Fixed problems Nasamea pointed out(ty) and finished the rest.
Fixed problems Nasamea pointed out(ty) and finished the rest.
Jeff- Konoha Chunnin
- Posts : 68
Join date : 2010-01-27
Re: Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
Approved.
May want to fix your spoiler tags btw.
EDIT: Ok, you didn't need his approval -_-
May want to fix your spoiler tags btw.
EDIT: Ok, you didn't need his approval -_-
Last edited by Nasamea on Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:09 pm; edited 1 time in total
Marixia- Kumo Chuunin
- Posts : 1672
Join date : 2009-07-14
Age : 31
Re: Rin Fuudoku(Finished)
thanks again Nasamea. I fixed the tags.
Jeff- Konoha Chunnin
- Posts : 68
Join date : 2010-01-27
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